for Uzumaki1/20/2023 c1 KaizoWaizo
Did you seriously accuse Kishimoto of sexualizing children from lines on paper with no actual real life children being harmed in any way and even accused two authors by name of grooming with 0 evidence?
That's not very adult. You don't just make big statements like that and try to act like the mature one. It's toxic as hell.
Did you seriously accuse Kishimoto of sexualizing children from lines on paper with no actual real life children being harmed in any way and even accused two authors by name of grooming with 0 evidence?
That's not very adult. You don't just make big statements like that and try to act like the mature one. It's toxic as hell.
1/10/2023 c44 amphitech
Man, I'll always miss this story. Followed it for a long time and loved every step of the way. You made a difficult choice, and i think it was correct. I hope you can recover from what happened. Farewell electric. o7
Man, I'll always miss this story. Followed it for a long time and loved every step of the way. You made a difficult choice, and i think it was correct. I hope you can recover from what happened. Farewell electric. o7
12/26/2022 c1 BOBbyboy177336
it's tragic what happened to you, sorry and hope you heal and get back to what you loved doing.
it's tragic what happened to you, sorry and hope you heal and get back to what you loved doing.
12/26/2022 c27 narutoXhinata9282772
you know, you are mindlessly adding roles for ino here.
she didn't even exist before chunin exam and now here she is trying to change naruto's memeries. it was okay till a limit on how much ino makes an impact on naruto but now she is breaking the limits of her character. she had no prior special connections with naruto, and now she is trying to give herself the pleasure of forcing naruto to change his decisions that can change his whole future.
you know, you are mindlessly adding roles for ino here.
she didn't even exist before chunin exam and now here she is trying to change naruto's memeries. it was okay till a limit on how much ino makes an impact on naruto but now she is breaking the limits of her character. she had no prior special connections with naruto, and now she is trying to give herself the pleasure of forcing naruto to change his decisions that can change his whole future.
11/13/2022 c4 EVIL-SAGE
these graveyard moments are amazing never have I thought I'd be feeling bad for Mizuki
these graveyard moments are amazing never have I thought I'd be feeling bad for Mizuki
11/2/2022 c7 
1Heaven's Thesis
I'm reading this from the top—it's been more than half a decade since I last came here—and I am so, so moved by your writing.
Your prose and voice and characterization are so bitterly, achingly sweet and I felt that my entire chest was caving in as I read this chapter and the ones preceding.
I am so, so sorry for what's been done to you, and I understand you stepping away. I hope that—wherever you are—you're finding peace and fulfillment in your life. Thank you so much for your writing and your heart. Please, please, please be well.
1Heaven's ThesisI'm reading this from the top—it's been more than half a decade since I last came here—and I am so, so moved by your writing.
Your prose and voice and characterization are so bitterly, achingly sweet and I felt that my entire chest was caving in as I read this chapter and the ones preceding.
I am so, so sorry for what's been done to you, and I understand you stepping away. I hope that—wherever you are—you're finding peace and fulfillment in your life. Thank you so much for your writing and your heart. Please, please, please be well.
9/4/2022 c1 mehwhatever
Lots of degenerates in this review section. Good on you for your choices author
Lots of degenerates in this review section. Good on you for your choices author
8/25/2022 c44 Stuke112
You know I’m very sorry for what happened to you but kishi doesn’t sexualise children and there fictional characters there are definitely times were sexualising characters are bad like when they make porn off children characters it’s weird but kishimoto didn’t even show the kid versions of Naruto characters really even doing adult scenes and barely even kissing if not any kissing and if you are talking about the jiraiya scenes and such kishimoto is basically portraying that being a pervert is bad we’ve seen it multiple times already and showing romance with children is pretty weird but if you don’t make them do adult acts then it will be fine me personally never liked it when authors make children characters do adult things it’s very uncomfortable and weird but if you just don’t do any of that it’s fine also kishimoto didn’t do romance with any of the kid versions of Naruto he even said he didn’t feel comfortable doing romance scenes since he doesn’t know how plus the Japan works they have different rules and view things way more differently
You know I’m very sorry for what happened to you but kishi doesn’t sexualise children and there fictional characters there are definitely times were sexualising characters are bad like when they make porn off children characters it’s weird but kishimoto didn’t even show the kid versions of Naruto characters really even doing adult scenes and barely even kissing if not any kissing and if you are talking about the jiraiya scenes and such kishimoto is basically portraying that being a pervert is bad we’ve seen it multiple times already and showing romance with children is pretty weird but if you don’t make them do adult acts then it will be fine me personally never liked it when authors make children characters do adult things it’s very uncomfortable and weird but if you just don’t do any of that it’s fine also kishimoto didn’t do romance with any of the kid versions of Naruto he even said he didn’t feel comfortable doing romance scenes since he doesn’t know how plus the Japan works they have different rules and view things way more differently
6/27/2022 c2 Guest
i dont like this fanfic
i dont like this fanfic
5/27/2022 c1 2SilverSurfer24
I'm sorry to hear what happened to you, and it's a shame that you'll stop writing this story, but I also have to say that I strongly disagree with your mention of the sexualization of Naruto*s and Boruto's characters (children).
First and foremost, they aren't children, they are fictional characters, and it is my view that an author-indipendent of age-should be capable of seperating fiction from reality. Otherwise we wouldn't have gotten many of the great stories that we do have on this platform and in mainstream media.
A middle aged author should never feel ashamed for writing a teen romance, love story or an anime with young characters. I would never look down upon an author for writing anything, not even if I found out that a middle aged man wrote the script of a loli hentai.
Why should I? It's fiction and the author made an effort to write a story, and probably got paid handsomley for it.
I'm not shaming your ideals, I would never do such a thing, but I just find it so utterly disheartening to see so many people who would take fiction at face value and see it as far more real than it is. It's fiction.
No one should feel bad for enjoying an Anime, not even if your are 80 years old. No one should feel bad for enjoying the look of any given Manga heroine, no matter how old, or young you are, because its not real.
True I fully agree that the Sarada fanservice in Boruto is way over the line, and I'm curious why Kishi would allow something like that to happen, but again it's fiction. The only thing I am concerned about is the fact that Sarada's character might be ruined because of this descision, and not that I'm an asshole for watching and even enjoying it.
Because again, I know that it's fiction, not reality.
2SilverSurfer24I'm sorry to hear what happened to you, and it's a shame that you'll stop writing this story, but I also have to say that I strongly disagree with your mention of the sexualization of Naruto*s and Boruto's characters (children).
First and foremost, they aren't children, they are fictional characters, and it is my view that an author-indipendent of age-should be capable of seperating fiction from reality. Otherwise we wouldn't have gotten many of the great stories that we do have on this platform and in mainstream media.
A middle aged author should never feel ashamed for writing a teen romance, love story or an anime with young characters. I would never look down upon an author for writing anything, not even if I found out that a middle aged man wrote the script of a loli hentai.
Why should I? It's fiction and the author made an effort to write a story, and probably got paid handsomley for it.
I'm not shaming your ideals, I would never do such a thing, but I just find it so utterly disheartening to see so many people who would take fiction at face value and see it as far more real than it is. It's fiction.
No one should feel bad for enjoying an Anime, not even if your are 80 years old. No one should feel bad for enjoying the look of any given Manga heroine, no matter how old, or young you are, because its not real.
True I fully agree that the Sarada fanservice in Boruto is way over the line, and I'm curious why Kishi would allow something like that to happen, but again it's fiction. The only thing I am concerned about is the fact that Sarada's character might be ruined because of this descision, and not that I'm an asshole for watching and even enjoying it.
Because again, I know that it's fiction, not reality.
5/26/2022 c2 Guest
Trash
Trash