for Uzumaki12/10/2021 c33 I See Your Secrets
Author keeps on saying and asking weird things, hes like
"Random Shit Go!" and throws Bullshit at you.
honestly it's quite funny.
Author keeps on saying and asking weird things, hes like
"Random Shit Go!" and throws Bullshit at you.
honestly it's quite funny.
11/22/2021 c7 rameliztwentyone
I think you took Naruto’s growth scene and unnecessarily gave them to Sasuke. Hardship in training and Battle with haku were wasted on Sasuke. And yes. You should’ve named her Sasuke.
I think you took Naruto’s growth scene and unnecessarily gave them to Sasuke. Hardship in training and Battle with haku were wasted on Sasuke. And yes. You should’ve named her Sasuke.
11/6/2021 c44 imAwonder
I found this amazing work after I took interest again jn Naruto d dayuuum... Fell in love with this!️️ Please update author-san! I neeeeed to read this until it ends! Love ya author
I found this amazing work after I took interest again jn Naruto d dayuuum... Fell in love with this!️️ Please update author-san! I neeeeed to read this until it ends! Love ya author
11/2/2021 c15 realfan16
ohr ...didn't see that coming *shakes head* how could you not give her more plot armor. Well at leasy she got a hit in *shrug(
ohr ...didn't see that coming *shakes head* how could you not give her more plot armor. Well at leasy she got a hit in *shrug(
11/1/2021 c44 
1autumnphoenix888
Oh my gosh, what a ride. This was beautiful. This is one of the best Naruto fanfics I've read in a while - and it's clear to see your incredible growth as a writer, from beginning to end. Even in its simplicity at the beginning, this story was so captivating. Near the end, it spiraled into something with so much more depth and emotion.
I absolutely loved the way you developed all the characters and their relationships. Naruto's drastic change in personality was surprising, but you depicted it in such a realistic and alluring way. Sakura is amazing - I could actually see her slow progression as a character, how she changed little by little through each of Naruto and Satsuki's actions. After a while, I grew to love her, different as she ended up in canon.
And, oh wow - Satsuki. I don't even know how to begin to explain how much of a complex, truly fleshed-out character she became. I wasn't really sure how a fresh reboot of Sasuke would turn out, at first. I'm not usually a big fan of OCs. But you absolutely nailed it. Her awkward way of expressing emotions, blunt way of speaking - everything was such a joy to read.
What I especially loved was how you developed her and Naruto's relationship. One of the small nitpicks I've always had about the anime was that Naruto and Sasuke's friendship felt a bit rushed in Part 1; it was kind of jarring when Sasuke came and outright declared them best friends. You handled it beautifully, though. Naruto and Satsuki truly shared something deep and genuine, and all of their interactions were so pure. Each little thing strengthened their bond - I really admire the way you're able to portray relationships like that.
Satsuki's little devil-spawn genin were so cute, too! (Ashi's hilarious, my favorite!)
And oh-my-lord, the imagery. I still have pictures in my mind of young Team 7 huddled in the dark, sharing scary stories and falling asleep snuggled together. Adorable. Naruto and Satsuki's fireworks scene was breathtakingly beautiful - this, too, has a vivid image reserved in my head.
The best part of this story, in my opinion, are the characters and their relationships. I am hopelessly attached to all of them. Satsuki and Sakura definitely took a while, but that's what gave them such a meaningful, sisterly bond. Kakashi was so sweet to her as well. Satsuki and Naruto's relationship in particular was so genuine and tragic. I love them all.
This was honestly nothing short of a masterpiece. I really hope you update it someday - I'm dying to see how it all plays out, but please do remember to take care of yourself first. Either way, I'm so glad I came across this. Thank you so much for this work of art.
1autumnphoenix888Oh my gosh, what a ride. This was beautiful. This is one of the best Naruto fanfics I've read in a while - and it's clear to see your incredible growth as a writer, from beginning to end. Even in its simplicity at the beginning, this story was so captivating. Near the end, it spiraled into something with so much more depth and emotion.
I absolutely loved the way you developed all the characters and their relationships. Naruto's drastic change in personality was surprising, but you depicted it in such a realistic and alluring way. Sakura is amazing - I could actually see her slow progression as a character, how she changed little by little through each of Naruto and Satsuki's actions. After a while, I grew to love her, different as she ended up in canon.
And, oh wow - Satsuki. I don't even know how to begin to explain how much of a complex, truly fleshed-out character she became. I wasn't really sure how a fresh reboot of Sasuke would turn out, at first. I'm not usually a big fan of OCs. But you absolutely nailed it. Her awkward way of expressing emotions, blunt way of speaking - everything was such a joy to read.
What I especially loved was how you developed her and Naruto's relationship. One of the small nitpicks I've always had about the anime was that Naruto and Sasuke's friendship felt a bit rushed in Part 1; it was kind of jarring when Sasuke came and outright declared them best friends. You handled it beautifully, though. Naruto and Satsuki truly shared something deep and genuine, and all of their interactions were so pure. Each little thing strengthened their bond - I really admire the way you're able to portray relationships like that.
Satsuki's little devil-spawn genin were so cute, too! (Ashi's hilarious, my favorite!)
And oh-my-lord, the imagery. I still have pictures in my mind of young Team 7 huddled in the dark, sharing scary stories and falling asleep snuggled together. Adorable. Naruto and Satsuki's fireworks scene was breathtakingly beautiful - this, too, has a vivid image reserved in my head.
The best part of this story, in my opinion, are the characters and their relationships. I am hopelessly attached to all of them. Satsuki and Sakura definitely took a while, but that's what gave them such a meaningful, sisterly bond. Kakashi was so sweet to her as well. Satsuki and Naruto's relationship in particular was so genuine and tragic. I love them all.
This was honestly nothing short of a masterpiece. I really hope you update it someday - I'm dying to see how it all plays out, but please do remember to take care of yourself first. Either way, I'm so glad I came across this. Thank you so much for this work of art.