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4/15/2018 c1 Guest
Is very difficult following this story it has no cohesion whatsoever
7/31/2017 c1 Guest
You should probably make an outline first and highlight the most important parts of the story before starting writing because honestly this story doesn't make any sense. have you heard of the rule "show don't tell" it's basically telling the story through the narrative, thoughts and action of the characters and not by having a bunch of characters giving exposition.
10/9/2014 c1 Clutch28
Horrendous...truly horrendous. Spelling issues, capitalization issues, rushing through the plot to get to your point also just a general lack of coherency to the plot.
9/2/2014 c1 1dead bones17
I love it
Awesome job

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