
10/3/2021 c2 Jessy Alexandra
Love it! Write more! Jack is so cute as a little kid!
Love it! Write more! Jack is so cute as a little kid!
7/15/2019 c2 Guest
Please continue this story! I really want to see what happens next!
Please continue this story! I really want to see what happens next!
5/9/2018 c2 Guest
And yet you still haven’t done it. Please update.
And yet you still haven’t done it. Please update.
9/9/2017 c2 mintGum
you broke my heart when there wasn't an extra chapter.. ;_;
you broke my heart when there wasn't an extra chapter.. ;_;
8/13/2017 c2 Guest
When is the next chapter coming!Please I want more!
When is the next chapter coming!Please I want more!
7/2/2017 c2 Guest
Please give me mooooooooooooooore
Please give me mooooooooooooooore
6/25/2017 c2 Sugarblob
I really like the story! First one I've read that uses this idea! It's really unique and cool! Keep going cause I'll be there to read it! Thanks for making this story it's very interesting! ~
I really like the story! First one I've read that uses this idea! It's really unique and cool! Keep going cause I'll be there to read it! Thanks for making this story it's very interesting! ~
1/30/2016 c1 yaoidemon15
Awesome story I wish that you would continue it but even so it's still a great start.
Awesome story I wish that you would continue it but even so it's still a great start.
6/19/2015 c2 Sparky
Please come back soon! Please?
Please come back soon! Please?
1/30/2015 c2 Aligator
Please continue
Please continue