for One Small Change8/31/2016 c9 NYFanFic
I am soo happy I found this story. Thanks for writing this.
I am soo happy I found this story. Thanks for writing this.
4/29/2015 c8 
155NephilimEQ
Okay, first of all, Jack propositioning Rose and the Doctor about their sex life was so perfectly in character and hilarious. I loved it! Second of all, this line: "Why doesn't anyone ever listen when I say, 'don't wander off'?" So perfect! Love this and all of the wonderful characterization. Spot on and excellent! Worth the wait. :)
155NephilimEQOkay, first of all, Jack propositioning Rose and the Doctor about their sex life was so perfectly in character and hilarious. I loved it! Second of all, this line: "Why doesn't anyone ever listen when I say, 'don't wander off'?" So perfect! Love this and all of the wonderful characterization. Spot on and excellent! Worth the wait. :)
4/28/2015 c8 6Godiva9
A fantastic chapter, I love the interplay between the Doctor and Jack, Rose and the Doctor and the Doctor, Rose and Jack! They are all absolutely hilarious! Keep up the great work, and while the up date was absolutely worth the wait, I hope the next one comes out soon! ; )
6Godiva9A fantastic chapter, I love the interplay between the Doctor and Jack, Rose and the Doctor and the Doctor, Rose and Jack! They are all absolutely hilarious! Keep up the great work, and while the up date was absolutely worth the wait, I hope the next one comes out soon! ; )
4/28/2015 c8 1subwayguy
This is good. I was only on the first season when I first favorited this story. Now I have finished it and it isn't my ship any more. But I am still reading!
1subwayguyThis is good. I was only on the first season when I first favorited this story. Now I have finished it and it isn't my ship any more. But I am still reading!
2/18/2015 c7 39TiaKisu
I must say, I really like the changes that you have made so far. Obviously, the favourite one is keeping Nine and Jack in the story but all the other little twists are quite unique as well. For example, I love how Harriet worked together with U.N.I.T. instead of being the head of Torchwood, and how thanks to Jack and Mickey she didn't have to attack the ship.
It the one thing that always bothered be about the Christmas Invasion: how Harriet had changed so much (she called Rose out on being a violent young woman before and now she just so kills hundrets of creatures) and the Doctor just so ended Britain's Second Golden Age. So thanks for altering that in a way that truly fits the characters instead.
Also, I appreciate it that you are weaving a past companion into this AU, and your idea to have the Werewolf show up in San Francisco first and reach Scottland via the Vortex Manipulator of the dead Time Agent was a clever change in events.
The scene at IKEA was fantastic and funny, and you let the characters interact in a natural way that was honest to them. In general I think you have captured the voices and characers really well so far and it should be interesting to see where you'll go with this.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
39TiaKisuI must say, I really like the changes that you have made so far. Obviously, the favourite one is keeping Nine and Jack in the story but all the other little twists are quite unique as well. For example, I love how Harriet worked together with U.N.I.T. instead of being the head of Torchwood, and how thanks to Jack and Mickey she didn't have to attack the ship.
It the one thing that always bothered be about the Christmas Invasion: how Harriet had changed so much (she called Rose out on being a violent young woman before and now she just so kills hundrets of creatures) and the Doctor just so ended Britain's Second Golden Age. So thanks for altering that in a way that truly fits the characters instead.
Also, I appreciate it that you are weaving a past companion into this AU, and your idea to have the Werewolf show up in San Francisco first and reach Scottland via the Vortex Manipulator of the dead Time Agent was a clever change in events.
The scene at IKEA was fantastic and funny, and you let the characters interact in a natural way that was honest to them. In general I think you have captured the voices and characers really well so far and it should be interesting to see where you'll go with this.
Thanks for writing and sharing.