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"The next essence will hopefully be far easier to get a grip on" apparently it was not, more the pity for this was a well written piece of work
"The next essence will hopefully be far easier to get a grip on" apparently it was not, more the pity for this was a well written piece of work
5/25/2019 c23 TehNSF
I really hope you'll be updating this fanfiction at some point. It's a very fun and interesting read.
I really hope you'll be updating this fanfiction at some point. It's a very fun and interesting read.
3/20/2019 c23 Guest
This story is good
This story is good
9/14/2017 c23 
9Drake G. Reaper
This is a pretty great story I'm really liking Spider-Jade and her group. It would be pretty great if you had it that with Jade's and Widow's improving relationship that at some point Widow's confidence is restored. The have her save Jade by beating Tarantula and taking back her leadership role.
9Drake G. ReaperThis is a pretty great story I'm really liking Spider-Jade and her group. It would be pretty great if you had it that with Jade's and Widow's improving relationship that at some point Widow's confidence is restored. The have her save Jade by beating Tarantula and taking back her leadership role.
8/1/2017 c4 9JimmyHall24
Ah man... so instead of a Shadowkhan she is going to become a giant spider demon? Ugh.
9JimmyHall24Ah man... so instead of a Shadowkhan she is going to become a giant spider demon? Ugh.
6/25/2017 c23 1W8W
Wspaniała historia, ma uczucie 6 sezonu czyli ponowne polowanie na moce masek jak to było z talizmanami demonami. Bardzo podoba mi się osobowość Jade mimo że lekko szalona i po stronie ciemności to cięgle ona. Także powód korupcji wydaje mi się wiarygodny. Czekam z niecierpliwością na kolejne rozdziały.
1W8WWspaniała historia, ma uczucie 6 sezonu czyli ponowne polowanie na moce masek jak to było z talizmanami demonami. Bardzo podoba mi się osobowość Jade mimo że lekko szalona i po stronie ciemności to cięgle ona. Także powód korupcji wydaje mi się wiarygodny. Czekam z niecierpliwością na kolejne rozdziały.
6/1/2017 c23 sleeplessdog
Nearly a year,I still waiting for you to update.I love this story and hope for a happy ending,maybe jade can realizing that she does not need to rule the world, she can also be happy.
Nearly a year,I still waiting for you to update.I love this story and hope for a happy ending,maybe jade can realizing that she does not need to rule the world, she can also be happy.
4/17/2017 c23 1ReyNok
Gotta say, I am FLOORED... this isn't what I expected coming in and I couldn't be happier; at this point it's nearing a year since this story was updated but I can't help but hold out hope that it will be finished someday. I'll be keeping more than a few eyes out. Keep up the fantastic work.
1ReyNokGotta say, I am FLOORED... this isn't what I expected coming in and I couldn't be happier; at this point it's nearing a year since this story was updated but I can't help but hold out hope that it will be finished someday. I'll be keeping more than a few eyes out. Keep up the fantastic work.
7/23/2016 c23 Kebarton
I just recently found this story and just couldn't help but finish it. It's quite amazing, and very well written.
I just recently found this story and just couldn't help but finish it. It's quite amazing, and very well written.
6/17/2016 c23 329bhut
Well, I have been re-reading this story from the beginning, and it is as enjoyable as always. Right now, we got team Chan and back-up, trying to work together, Jade, who is truly tangled between Tarakudo and the late (but not departed) original Spider Queen, and Steel & Hartmann, who are about to have problems of their own, one way or another. So far, this is a truly terrific tale. Thanks for the update.
329bhutWell, I have been re-reading this story from the beginning, and it is as enjoyable as always. Right now, we got team Chan and back-up, trying to work together, Jade, who is truly tangled between Tarakudo and the late (but not departed) original Spider Queen, and Steel & Hartmann, who are about to have problems of their own, one way or another. So far, this is a truly terrific tale. Thanks for the update.
6/15/2016 c23 4RobinLost
I don't normally review, but this chapter has stuck in my head and made me feel unsettled since yesterday. Your OC villain is rather interesting, but Jade's conversation with Tohru at the end gave me chills, even more so when I connected Jade saving the essence for her choice of general, and Jade's attempts to encourage those around her to be everything they can.
Jade's insanity is chilling, and the fact it is so logical even more so. I am seriously worried for Tohru, and what Jade intends. It's even worse that she has good intentions and wants to help people, is ever so pleased when one of those she cares for does well, she is still Jade, while being all twisted up and I really feel for Jackie and Tohru, who can see she is still Jade and doesn't know how to save her, or even if they can, (or maybe even should at this point)
Excellent writing, and I really am excited about where this story is going.
4RobinLostI don't normally review, but this chapter has stuck in my head and made me feel unsettled since yesterday. Your OC villain is rather interesting, but Jade's conversation with Tohru at the end gave me chills, even more so when I connected Jade saving the essence for her choice of general, and Jade's attempts to encourage those around her to be everything they can.
Jade's insanity is chilling, and the fact it is so logical even more so. I am seriously worried for Tohru, and what Jade intends. It's even worse that she has good intentions and wants to help people, is ever so pleased when one of those she cares for does well, she is still Jade, while being all twisted up and I really feel for Jackie and Tohru, who can see she is still Jade and doesn't know how to save her, or even if they can, (or maybe even should at this point)
Excellent writing, and I really am excited about where this story is going.