for Words He Should Never Say1/10/2017 c1 Lili
I feel sorry for poor Kili all ge wanted to do was hang out with his cool older brother, and what did he get for doing so? That being said I can also understand how Fili felt, he should ed have said what he said that wasn't any excuse for what he said but. For not wanting to wash Kili all day long is understandabull he is ten and (if memory serves me correctly) Kili is five that is quite bit of an are differents. He wanted to do his own thing with out stopping and do things with his little bother. Anyone with a yunger family member or more the one or anyone in jenaural had felt that way at less once. I hope Fili don't get in to much trouble, it is more then obvious that he is truly sorry for upseting Kili. I hope Kili also doesn't get in to to much trouble for it us obvious that he was more the a little upset. This doesn't make Fili s bad bother he said something mean and heatfull but who hasn't? The inporten thing is that he gaved Kili an true apologie has soon as he was able and he (so I'm assuming) felt sorry as soon as he said or a heart beat after. As you can see I'm horrible at spelling I hope that I at less spelled it close enough that you're able to tell l what I trying to say.
I feel sorry for poor Kili all ge wanted to do was hang out with his cool older brother, and what did he get for doing so? That being said I can also understand how Fili felt, he should ed have said what he said that wasn't any excuse for what he said but. For not wanting to wash Kili all day long is understandabull he is ten and (if memory serves me correctly) Kili is five that is quite bit of an are differents. He wanted to do his own thing with out stopping and do things with his little bother. Anyone with a yunger family member or more the one or anyone in jenaural had felt that way at less once. I hope Fili don't get in to much trouble, it is more then obvious that he is truly sorry for upseting Kili. I hope Kili also doesn't get in to to much trouble for it us obvious that he was more the a little upset. This doesn't make Fili s bad bother he said something mean and heatfull but who hasn't? The inporten thing is that he gaved Kili an true apologie has soon as he was able and he (so I'm assuming) felt sorry as soon as he said or a heart beat after. As you can see I'm horrible at spelling I hope that I at less spelled it close enough that you're able to tell l what I trying to say.
11/29/2016 c1 
6ThatOtherWriterGirl
awwww, so sweet!
I love baby Fili and Kili.
No wonder Thorin has so many grey hairs. ha ha.
6ThatOtherWriterGirlawwww, so sweet!
I love baby Fili and Kili.
No wonder Thorin has so many grey hairs. ha ha.
8/2/2015 c1 Guest
I love how close they are!
I love how close they are!
1/7/2015 c1 Stormcutter684
Fighting. Ah, not at all pleasant. Now a longing in me desires to be close to my brother like that, to any sibling really. But instead we aren't. And yes, I'm sure everyone's said 'I hate you before.' And those really are words you don't mean.
Fighting. Ah, not at all pleasant. Now a longing in me desires to be close to my brother like that, to any sibling really. But instead we aren't. And yes, I'm sure everyone's said 'I hate you before.' And those really are words you don't mean.
11/9/2014 c1 Nuka
Sniff, this and my cold have made me cry (Mostly this...)
Sniff, this and my cold have made me cry (Mostly this...)
7/16/2014 c1 16Knifez
o mai gawd so sad but so fuffeh at teh saim tiem1
i wish the smooched or sumthin (tho dont tell my parents i said tht nautee word ill get in troubl) becuz famile shuld alwaz be kloes and stuf.
anywai gud riter and i wish to rite as gud as u wun dae.
kep it up
-kniefiezz
16Knifezo mai gawd so sad but so fuffeh at teh saim tiem1
i wish the smooched or sumthin (tho dont tell my parents i said tht nautee word ill get in troubl) becuz famile shuld alwaz be kloes and stuf.
anywai gud riter and i wish to rite as gud as u wun dae.
kep it up
-kniefiezz
6/16/2014 c1 66Frodo's sister
Having trouble finding Kili must have been scary for Fili. It is also a good lesson for him. Never tell someone you hate them.
66Frodo's sisterHaving trouble finding Kili must have been scary for Fili. It is also a good lesson for him. Never tell someone you hate them.
6/16/2014 c1 14EquusGold
This is really good. Oh sweet brotherly love. (If only my brother was so tender!) and yet all I could think at the end was : "Do these dwarves ever have a good experience with trees?" But there you have it. Loved it. Your one-shots are just so full of feels, its sweet.
14EquusGoldThis is really good. Oh sweet brotherly love. (If only my brother was so tender!) and yet all I could think at the end was : "Do these dwarves ever have a good experience with trees?" But there you have it. Loved it. Your one-shots are just so full of feels, its sweet.
5/5/2014 c1 61ncis-lady
Oh dear, that was so cute! Gotta love little Kili and Fili. Yeah, the things we say to our siblings... Children often speak without thinking, and sometimes we say things we regret later. I'm quite sure I've told my sister I hate her when we were young, and I know I never would have forgiven myself if she had run away. Now, as adults (or wannabe-adults, that's more like it), we still fight sometimes but we always reconcile before we part. You never know if maybe the words you say will be the last words, and if they are then they better be something nice.
61ncis-ladyOh dear, that was so cute! Gotta love little Kili and Fili. Yeah, the things we say to our siblings... Children often speak without thinking, and sometimes we say things we regret later. I'm quite sure I've told my sister I hate her when we were young, and I know I never would have forgiven myself if she had run away. Now, as adults (or wannabe-adults, that's more like it), we still fight sometimes but we always reconcile before we part. You never know if maybe the words you say will be the last words, and if they are then they better be something nice.
4/14/2014 c1 10The Ghostly Horse
Hi. I've been following Illusions ever since I found it late last year, and I love your works, so, truly, love them. Your skill with words snatch me up and dump me right in there with the dwarven brothers and I thank you for that. You make me feel everything, and I'm usually good at the subjective point of view. I can only hope that I am half as good as you.
10The Ghostly HorseHi. I've been following Illusions ever since I found it late last year, and I love your works, so, truly, love them. Your skill with words snatch me up and dump me right in there with the dwarven brothers and I thank you for that. You make me feel everything, and I'm usually good at the subjective point of view. I can only hope that I am half as good as you.
4/8/2014 c1 JeanLaQ
Oh I really enjoyed this little piece, so sweet. This - "his little boots touching at the toes" - hit me right in the heart. Poor little Fili, I can just see it. Also hitting me right in the heart was the thought of poor little Kili thinking his beloved Fili hated him. Thanks for sharing!
Oh I really enjoyed this little piece, so sweet. This - "his little boots touching at the toes" - hit me right in the heart. Poor little Fili, I can just see it. Also hitting me right in the heart was the thought of poor little Kili thinking his beloved Fili hated him. Thanks for sharing!