
1/30/2019 c3
5Syndrias82
This is really good, the characterization of the cast is delivered quickly, efficiently and in a manner that throughly entertains me. That's the greatest strength I'm seeing so far and I hope that you continue writing this because it's really fucking good

This is really good, the characterization of the cast is delivered quickly, efficiently and in a manner that throughly entertains me. That's the greatest strength I'm seeing so far and I hope that you continue writing this because it's really fucking good
12/29/2017 c3 Guest
Huh. Neat story. Your Naruto is a little out there for my tastes but he's fun. Your Sakura and Sasuke are super interesting. Shame it looks like the story has been dropped. Here's to hoping for your return in the new year!
Huh. Neat story. Your Naruto is a little out there for my tastes but he's fun. Your Sakura and Sasuke are super interesting. Shame it looks like the story has been dropped. Here's to hoping for your return in the new year!
12/3/2017 c3 Whyyyyyy
Oh my gawdddddd. I hope that you choose to pic this fix up again. I would ove to see more of how these three interact.
Oh my gawdddddd. I hope that you choose to pic this fix up again. I would ove to see more of how these three interact.
1/10/2017 c1
1Docanon222
I like this story, even though it's only three chapters. Here's a poem.
Btw, this has nothing to do with my feelings on the story.
I don't like this
I don't care
I read whatever
That's right up there
XD good story so far

I like this story, even though it's only three chapters. Here's a poem.
Btw, this has nothing to do with my feelings on the story.
I don't like this
I don't care
I read whatever
That's right up there
XD good story so far
9/30/2016 c3
2KingPlotBunny
damn its like you took Shadygons's personality and distributed it to all members of team 7 its a little disturbing but fitting shame this project is probably deader than a black guy in a shooting stance in front of police oh well since your a prissy brit I doubt you know what that means unless you keep up with American news later. 'MERICA!

damn its like you took Shadygons's personality and distributed it to all members of team 7 its a little disturbing but fitting shame this project is probably deader than a black guy in a shooting stance in front of police oh well since your a prissy brit I doubt you know what that means unless you keep up with American news later. 'MERICA!
9/30/2016 c1 KingPlotBunny
so I went to your profile like a creepy stalker troll and started reading this I like it funny how Sasuke is being treated shitty yet acts exactly the same as canon even when its showed how fucked up his clan is oh well at least Naruto and Itachi are treated well Kishi fucked them up the ass in canon
so I went to your profile like a creepy stalker troll and started reading this I like it funny how Sasuke is being treated shitty yet acts exactly the same as canon even when its showed how fucked up his clan is oh well at least Naruto and Itachi are treated well Kishi fucked them up the ass in canon
9/16/2015 c1 Atlas
For the love of jeebus, update "torching heaven". Please. It's like 1/3 of the best AU stories out there.
For the love of jeebus, update "torching heaven". Please. It's like 1/3 of the best AU stories out there.
8/27/2015 c3 Asap123
Hey man/girl this is a Really cool story. There isn't anything bad about this story that I can say. My fav thing is the idea is very refreshing.
Hey man/girl this is a Really cool story. There isn't anything bad about this story that I can say. My fav thing is the idea is very refreshing.
8/24/2015 c3 javi30
muy bueno
muy bueno
8/24/2015 c3 Guest
Please update soon, this is so marvellous
Please update soon, this is so marvellous
8/24/2015 c2 Guest
"Explosives fix everything" Beautiful
"Explosives fix everything" Beautiful