for As Long As You're Mine2/14/2016 c9 Exploding Pumpkinhead
YESSSSSS BRING ON THE ELPHIK! I know this happened last chappie, but this confitms it. You have made me the happiest fangirl alive!
YESSSSSS BRING ON THE ELPHIK! I know this happened last chappie, but this confitms it. You have made me the happiest fangirl alive!
12/21/2014 c12 
3nightmarehunter676
This is good! Are you going to continue? I like where this is going!
3nightmarehunter676This is good! Are you going to continue? I like where this is going!
11/4/2014 c1 Jaz
Please put the story back up, SOON!
Please put the story back up, SOON!
6/13/2014 c11 Elphaba'sGirl
YAY my ideas helped! I think it's hilarious that you had this whole chapter, with all it's magic and witch-talk, from Erik's point of view.
Update soon!
YAY my ideas helped! I think it's hilarious that you had this whole chapter, with all it's magic and witch-talk, from Erik's point of view.
Update soon!
6/12/2014 c9 Elphaba'sGirl
Okay. You said you need ideas for this. Pretend that this review is at the end of ch 10...
First; what if the bubble wasn't Galinda? What if Galinda, too, is in this world. Maybe she met up with Raoul or is staying with the Girys? Then... The bubble could be... MORRIBLE.
Or, in the event that it is Glinda, you've already established the Gale force's presence. Maybe they aren't after Elphaba at all, but Glinda? Maybe because they think she is an accomplice of the wicked witch? Or for some other reason.
Maybe Fiyero is among them. He is either still in love with Elphaba (leading to a Fiyero and Erik battle) or has come to resent her (also leading to a Fiyero and Erik battle)
For a random filler scene you could have Erik dramatically put away his picture of Christine, showing that he is in love with someone else, or Elphaba once again admiring her necklace.
Mmm... Kay that's all I've got. You could mix and match them or use one, or none! If I think of more ideas I'll leave a review to chapter 8!
Okay. You said you need ideas for this. Pretend that this review is at the end of ch 10...
First; what if the bubble wasn't Galinda? What if Galinda, too, is in this world. Maybe she met up with Raoul or is staying with the Girys? Then... The bubble could be... MORRIBLE.
Or, in the event that it is Glinda, you've already established the Gale force's presence. Maybe they aren't after Elphaba at all, but Glinda? Maybe because they think she is an accomplice of the wicked witch? Or for some other reason.
Maybe Fiyero is among them. He is either still in love with Elphaba (leading to a Fiyero and Erik battle) or has come to resent her (also leading to a Fiyero and Erik battle)
For a random filler scene you could have Erik dramatically put away his picture of Christine, showing that he is in love with someone else, or Elphaba once again admiring her necklace.
Mmm... Kay that's all I've got. You could mix and match them or use one, or none! If I think of more ideas I'll leave a review to chapter 8!
4/28/2014 c5 3PhantomWriter44
This story is Wicked interesting. I'm not all too familiar with the Wicked but I know the song Defying Gravity which is one of my favorites. I feel bad for Christine though, however I find it sort of ironic how she's now acting as his guardian angel. If he isn't just imagining it. I hope you write more, can't wait for the next chapter! :D
3PhantomWriter44This story is Wicked interesting. I'm not all too familiar with the Wicked but I know the song Defying Gravity which is one of my favorites. I feel bad for Christine though, however I find it sort of ironic how she's now acting as his guardian angel. If he isn't just imagining it. I hope you write more, can't wait for the next chapter! :D
3/31/2014 c7 4Beauties Who Dance
I teared up. And i know that you know that it doesnt take much, but this is beautifully written. Well done, well done.
4Beauties Who DanceI teared up. And i know that you know that it doesnt take much, but this is beautifully written. Well done, well done.
3/28/2014 c6 Beauties Who Dance
Haha i remember the prima donna issue! :D and the last verse of Past the Point of No Return.
Haha i remember the prima donna issue! :D and the last verse of Past the Point of No Return.