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7/8/2014 c1 Guest
The content of the story is great, but the humongous paragraph at the end of the prose is distracting, especially since it contains dialogue from both Emma and Neal. The story would be more readable if you made a new paragraph each time you changed speaker.
Otherwise, like I said, the content is good, it's a nice story and there aren't enough swanfire fics so keep writing!
3/12/2014 c1 Guest
Nice! Want more :)
3/12/2014 c1 maressaonce
Really great start you got there and please make it a multi chapter. There aren't enough SF fanfics out there!

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