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6/13/2014 c1 Matt
I like this piece over all, especially the author's ability to mesh character info with plot, withholding enough to keep you reading. The lead male female dynamic seems interesting and may have promise to hold an entires series in that it can keep a degree of sexual tension but isn't likely to lead to the initially satisfying but inevitably boring comfortable relationship that defend like plagues on 3rd season sitcoms. The violence aspect is unique but has the potential to make me unsympathetic to the male lead. The language is good, albeit a bit overdone at points. Interested to see what's next.

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