
11/11/2014 c6 Elise
Very intriguing, interesting, well written, great, captivating, awesome...
Thank you for writing this story. :)
Very intriguing, interesting, well written, great, captivating, awesome...
Thank you for writing this story. :)
5/17/2014 c6 Meh
Doesn't lesus know grisia is a candidate?
Doesn't lesus know grisia is a candidate?
4/6/2014 c6 luka yuki
poor lesues ... but iwant to read what happen to grisia did he forget? please update sooooooon thanks
poor lesues ... but iwant to read what happen to grisia did he forget? please update sooooooon thanks
3/28/2014 c5 luka yuki
what grisia still with them ? ...hope you update more it was short
what grisia still with them ? ...hope you update more it was short
3/23/2014 c4 me
This is a bit confusing. Is grisia blind here?
This is a bit confusing. Is grisia blind here?
3/21/2014 c4 Fandoom-strikes
thanks for the new chapter !
You update pretty fast !
I don't think that you do grisias character bad ! I think It's ok how it is . Not perfekt , but good .
so creus and grisisa are two different people here ? interesting ! I want to know who that creus is and what skarlet gave grisia .
But one question : when does this story plays ? grisia only finds out that he is a canidate when skarlet is already looked away , right ? It could be that I remember it wrong but I want to make sure .
till next time ,
isa
thanks for the new chapter !
You update pretty fast !
I don't think that you do grisias character bad ! I think It's ok how it is . Not perfekt , but good .
so creus and grisisa are two different people here ? interesting ! I want to know who that creus is and what skarlet gave grisia .
But one question : when does this story plays ? grisia only finds out that he is a canidate when skarlet is already looked away , right ? It could be that I remember it wrong but I want to make sure .
till next time ,
isa
3/19/2014 c3 Fandoom-strikes
I love this story !
good plot , nice writting style , not too OOC , nothing to with for ...
except a new chapter ! I hope you can update soon I want to knoow what happened to sun/grisia
till next time ,
isa
I love this story !
good plot , nice writting style , not too OOC , nothing to with for ...
except a new chapter ! I hope you can update soon I want to knoow what happened to sun/grisia
till next time ,
isa