for Rahne and Poure (CH 01): First Look7/1/2015 c7 Eveleech
I am really sorry for saying this, but...this fanfic is bombastic with the insta-love, over-the-top romantic statements, and the "Power Of Love".
Don't you think you should make the romance between Rachne and Erik slow at first instead of being instant and superficial.
I am really sorry for saying this, but...this fanfic is bombastic with the insta-love, over-the-top romantic statements, and the "Power Of Love".
Don't you think you should make the romance between Rachne and Erik slow at first instead of being instant and superficial.
10/15/2014 c2 
2Bad Coffee
Excellent job so far! I love that Rahne and Tabitha are friends in your story as well. Really interested to see how things go with Rahne's admirer...I'll try to finish this later this week and post some more reviews. Strong start so far though.
2Bad CoffeeExcellent job so far! I love that Rahne and Tabitha are friends in your story as well. Really interested to see how things go with Rahne's admirer...I'll try to finish this later this week and post some more reviews. Strong start so far though.
9/27/2014 c1 7Sunspot101
I'm just realizing that 'Rhane and Poure' sounds like 'rain and pour' like how people can say that the rain is pouring down!, well that's what it looks like to me anyways. :)
7Sunspot101I'm just realizing that 'Rhane and Poure' sounds like 'rain and pour' like how people can say that the rain is pouring down!, well that's what it looks like to me anyways. :)
7/10/2014 c6 Jay Maddox
OMG that was likes so sweet of him to say! I literally teared up at the end of the chapter I was like oh my God TTvTT
OMG that was likes so sweet of him to say! I literally teared up at the end of the chapter I was like oh my God TTvTT
5/3/2014 c4 guest123
great!
great!
4/21/2014 c3 mishiffle
really good!
really good!
4/18/2014 c3 annoying intern
Moar!
Moar!
4/12/2014 c3 tanyl12
keep going please!
keep going please!
4/11/2014 c3 Guest
This is adorable!
This is adorable!
4/11/2014 c1 geniebye12
so cuuttte! keep it up!
so cuuttte! keep it up!
4/10/2014 c3 betty
how cute!
how cute!