5/20/2015 c4 Guest
nice story
nice story
8/13/2014 c3 8SummerTime17
Hey, it was a good start but make sure you space out the paragraphs and speaking lines so it easier to read. :) great so far. :D
Hey, it was a good start but make sure you space out the paragraphs and speaking lines so it easier to read. :) great so far. :D
8/13/2014 c4 14miaaaadv
I love your story, blue, green, and purple, Owl City, Echosmith, Paper Tigers, I'm not specific to one genre, chocolate, and journalism! What if there's just like a mini scene where Cammie's walking outside or something and then she trips and Zach catches her and dips her and she's all like, "How did you know I was here?" and he does the "Spy." thing and kisses her. Not really a chapter plot... But in my mind super cute.
I love your story, blue, green, and purple, Owl City, Echosmith, Paper Tigers, I'm not specific to one genre, chocolate, and journalism! What if there's just like a mini scene where Cammie's walking outside or something and then she trips and Zach catches her and dips her and she's all like, "How did you know I was here?" and he does the "Spy." thing and kisses her. Not really a chapter plot... But in my mind super cute.
8/9/2014 c3 3me is Inteligent
I'm pretty sure that line you used when Cammie had the gun was from "The Princess Bride." Please, correct me if I'm wrong. I laughed at that rememberingt he scene. Wow, this would be really awkward if you just thought of it and have no idea what I'm talking about... Oh well. By the way Love It! You'd better update soon, or I will send Bex to hunt you down! JK JK. (I wish I knew Bex) Great job! Keep writing!
I'm pretty sure that line you used when Cammie had the gun was from "The Princess Bride." Please, correct me if I'm wrong. I laughed at that rememberingt he scene. Wow, this would be really awkward if you just thought of it and have no idea what I'm talking about... Oh well. By the way Love It! You'd better update soon, or I will send Bex to hunt you down! JK JK. (I wish I knew Bex) Great job! Keep writing!
8/7/2014 c3 Asdfghjkl.fangir
More more more more more more more more
I NEED MORE FANFIC!
More more more more more more more more
I NEED MORE FANFIC!
8/7/2014 c3 Kelsey
Hey read ur story and it is AWESOME!Looking forward to some Zammie!Now q&a...what is you favorite band/song?!Cant wait for next update!
Hey read ur story and it is AWESOME!Looking forward to some Zammie!Now q&a...what is you favorite band/song?!Cant wait for next update!
8/9/2014 c3 14miaaaadv
Ooh, don't leave me on a cliff! Question: What was the last song you sang? Mine was Give Me Your Hand (Best Song Ever) by The Ready Set and I can do ASL for the chorus!
Ooh, don't leave me on a cliff! Question: What was the last song you sang? Mine was Give Me Your Hand (Best Song Ever) by The Ready Set and I can do ASL for the chorus!
8/8/2014 c3 hi
Wow great story right know I'm on vacation so I can't follow you but when I get home I will so can you count this as a follow and keep updating plz
Wow great story right know I'm on vacation so I can't follow you but when I get home I will so can you count this as a follow and keep updating plz
8/3/2014 c2 shut up and kiss her
i know you havent updated in a while but i hope you dont give up on tis story becouse i really like it and want to see where it is going. It dosent matter if peiple review or not just keep posting!
i know you havent updated in a while but i hope you dont give up on tis story becouse i really like it and want to see where it is going. It dosent matter if peiple review or not just keep posting!
4/29/2014 c2 3Sunshine011
Hey gal nice chapter I liked it. But it's a little short so just keep that in mind!
Hey gal nice chapter I liked it. But it's a little short so just keep that in mind!
4/5/2014 c2 NoNAMe
Update
Update
3/24/2014 c2 CrystalMorgan
This is really goode ;) lol plz update tootles
This is really goode ;) lol plz update tootles
3/24/2014 c2 a
You have only written one very short chapter so there is not much to review on
You have only written one very short chapter so there is not much to review on
3/23/2014 c2 Lillian
Love ur story so much hope u update
Love ur story so much hope u update