for Natsu Shinigami God Slayer2/8/2015 c23 TheLaughingStalk
I'd like to up-vote or nominate the idea for a new chapter and call it "Hashtag fuckherrightinthepussy!" where it calms down all the suspense and in the end Natsu has a 'wonderful Tim's having 'fun' with all of the members of the harem except Hitsui cause that royalty shit... pweeze... like a boss.
I'd like to up-vote or nominate the idea for a new chapter and call it "Hashtag fuckherrightinthepussy!" where it calms down all the suspense and in the end Natsu has a 'wonderful Tim's having 'fun' with all of the members of the harem except Hitsui cause that royalty shit... pweeze... like a boss.
12/13/2014 c2 lay of the drugs
You fucking suck ass with your shitty story I expected something good instead a halfbacked braincell with no vocabulary beyond a "cool, uhh, boom, kha" lay of the drugs
You fucking suck ass with your shitty story I expected something good instead a halfbacked braincell with no vocabulary beyond a "cool, uhh, boom, kha" lay of the drugs
10/31/2014 c12 galunaknowsbest
I'm sorry if I offend you but I really cant stand all this 'like a boss' shit. its just awful. you should try and rewrite this like a more regular story and more people would read and get interested in it and there would be another good story out there. to be honest, with the parts I could bare to read the storyline was quite interesting, but I couldn't continue with all that 'like a boss' crap. I hope you continue to write interesting story's I just hope I can bare through it. I'm sorry if I offended you but these reviews are here for a reason.
I'm sorry if I offend you but I really cant stand all this 'like a boss' shit. its just awful. you should try and rewrite this like a more regular story and more people would read and get interested in it and there would be another good story out there. to be honest, with the parts I could bare to read the storyline was quite interesting, but I couldn't continue with all that 'like a boss' crap. I hope you continue to write interesting story's I just hope I can bare through it. I'm sorry if I offended you but these reviews are here for a reason.
9/12/2014 c1 IM HUNGRY
U HAVE SOME SERIOUS ISSUES
U HAVE SOME SERIOUS ISSUES
8/13/2014 c5 XIII Xemnaz
to be honest when i first saw your summary in july i skipped over it thinking that it was going to be just another crappy OP natsu story lol but i got bored so i decided to give it a try and ...you know it is a crappy OP natsu story but a very very funny one i just read the first five chapters and i'm hooked lol going to keep reading now
to be honest when i first saw your summary in july i skipped over it thinking that it was going to be just another crappy OP natsu story lol but i got bored so i decided to give it a try and ...you know it is a crappy OP natsu story but a very very funny one i just read the first five chapters and i'm hooked lol going to keep reading now
8/9/2014 c8 AlignedSausage69
It's annoying how everything is hashtag this hashtag that hashtag bad ass mofo
It's annoying how everything is hashtag this hashtag that hashtag bad ass mofo
8/9/2014 c23 x-05-x
Since I read this with my mobile I could see the bro fist so here you have it back
A good chapter but it was not as badass as the others... Dunno why
Maybe you're getting old? Or the kind of badass I was looking for just wouldn't have fit into this chapter of you know what I mean :D
Since I read this with my mobile I could see the bro fist so here you have it back
A good chapter but it was not as badass as the others... Dunno why
Maybe you're getting old? Or the kind of badass I was looking for just wouldn't have fit into this chapter of you know what I mean :D