for Natsu Shinigami God Slayer6/23/2014 c1 Frostshine
dumb complety dumb why would a god of death SAVE A CHILD HE DOSNT EVEN KNOW HIM AND PROPLE THOUGHT OF HIM AS A THREAT AND ONLY ONE HIT AND HES KNOCK OUT! if you are obsessed with bossiness at lest be one in your wrighting
dumb complety dumb why would a god of death SAVE A CHILD HE DOSNT EVEN KNOW HIM AND PROPLE THOUGHT OF HIM AS A THREAT AND ONLY ONE HIT AND HES KNOCK OUT! if you are obsessed with bossiness at lest be one in your wrighting
6/8/2014 c21 treeofsakuras
Yeyy, you updated. XD
Great chapter, can't wait to see what will happen with Minerva, when she's turned into a demon. And there will be a connection between END and natsu?
More moments between natsu and the girls, XD
Yeyy, you updated. XD
Great chapter, can't wait to see what will happen with Minerva, when she's turned into a demon. And there will be a connection between END and natsu?
More moments between natsu and the girls, XD
5/6/2014 c20 Guest
Easily the most hilarious fanfic I ever read almost died because of laughter lol
Easily the most hilarious fanfic I ever read almost died because of laughter lol
4/16/2014 c20 treeofsakuras
Jaja, great chapter, I'd have love to see more natsuxhisui, didn't give her too much time with natsu, hope to see her again. What guild will yukino join?
Hope you update soon, XD
Jaja, great chapter, I'd have love to see more natsuxhisui, didn't give her too much time with natsu, hope to see her again. What guild will yukino join?
Hope you update soon, XD
4/14/2014 c19 
4FanFictionHunter
Looks like Natsu's has offically grown to "royal" size. Though I'm not sure what I'm more concerned about, the Lucy basing while at the sametime hitting on Lucy or the imminate coming of "KING(like a boss) NATSU".
4FanFictionHunterLooks like Natsu's has offically grown to "royal" size. Though I'm not sure what I'm more concerned about, the Lucy basing while at the sametime hitting on Lucy or the imminate coming of "KING(like a boss) NATSU".
4/13/2014 c19 1Serena of the Dawn
Love how the story is coming out but please stop with the emo references I find them very offensive as I was emo
1Serena of the DawnLove how the story is coming out but please stop with the emo references I find them very offensive as I was emo
4/13/2014 c19 treeofsakuras
Great chapter, really like this, can't wait to see natsu owning the dragons, hope future rogue gives him a decent fight at least, XD. How will you make with ultear tripping to sacrifice herself? Will natsu save her?
Ahhh, more natsuxhisui moments please, now that natsu is her fiancé, XD. Can't wait to see the girls f
Reaction to this, XD.
Ahhh can't wait, hope you update soon, XD
Great chapter, really like this, can't wait to see natsu owning the dragons, hope future rogue gives him a decent fight at least, XD. How will you make with ultear tripping to sacrifice herself? Will natsu save her?
Ahhh, more natsuxhisui moments please, now that natsu is her fiancé, XD. Can't wait to see the girls f
Reaction to this, XD.
Ahhh can't wait, hope you update soon, XD
4/9/2014 c18 4FanFictionHunter
Since this story is already at the GMG arc after 3 weeks since it was published, You are anything but lazy. XD
4FanFictionHunterSince this story is already at the GMG arc after 3 weeks since it was published, You are anything but lazy. XD
4/8/2014 c3 7Rex Draconium
Again, with the grammar, capitalization, and spelling...
Although I'm sad to say, I can now read it fluently... You're a terrible influence on me... But I'll keep reading, because grammar aside, it's really good.
7Rex DraconiumAgain, with the grammar, capitalization, and spelling...
Although I'm sad to say, I can now read it fluently... You're a terrible influence on me... But I'll keep reading, because grammar aside, it's really good.
4/8/2014 c18 treeofsakuras
Awesome chapter, here natsu really was the boss, XD
So are you gonna make the ova or go direct to the last day of the GMG?
Awesome chapter, here natsu really was the boss, XD
So are you gonna make the ova or go direct to the last day of the GMG?
4/8/2014 c2 Rex Draconium
Ah, well, that answers that.
And as much as I like crack fics, I also like correct grammar, spelling, and otherwise proper English. I can still read it, but it's less enjoyable.
Either way, I'll keep reading.
Also, who's going to be in the harem? Will anyone else have changes from their past?
Ah, well, that answers that.
And as much as I like crack fics, I also like correct grammar, spelling, and otherwise proper English. I can still read it, but it's less enjoyable.
Either way, I'll keep reading.
Also, who's going to be in the harem? Will anyone else have changes from their past?
4/8/2014 c1 Rex Draconium
Is this the Shingami from Death Note? Or an OC?
Regardless, looks like a great story, and I look forward to reading the rest!
Is this the Shingami from Death Note? Or an OC?
Regardless, looks like a great story, and I look forward to reading the rest!