
2/8/2019 c2
1Nobellee
fuck sakes. this is amazing, it bloody 4am and im laughing my ass off. your writing humor is amazing xD

fuck sakes. this is amazing, it bloody 4am and im laughing my ass off. your writing humor is amazing xD
12/24/2018 c25 Guest
I wanna see that Natsu x Brandish x Dimaria three some. ;3
I wanna see that Natsu x Brandish x Dimaria three some. ;3
12/4/2018 c25 Fan
this is the best fic I've ever read on fanfiction please I need more story to live in it is too good-love the Natsu x Irene stuff
this is the best fic I've ever read on fanfiction please I need more story to live in it is too good-love the Natsu x Irene stuff
11/19/2018 c8 Kiaan
Good
Good
9/20/2018 c1 oretachinosekai
okay, wow.
i really hope that this is a parody (i mean you DID say crackish fic in the summary).
if it is, great going! you've done almost as good a job as SasukeLuvr over on Wattpad with their story False Love (which turned out to be a MASSIVE troll)
if it ISN'T...
yeah, no comment.
but i'll never see the word 'badass' the same way again either way, so *shrugs*
okay, wow.
i really hope that this is a parody (i mean you DID say crackish fic in the summary).
if it is, great going! you've done almost as good a job as SasukeLuvr over on Wattpad with their story False Love (which turned out to be a MASSIVE troll)
if it ISN'T...
yeah, no comment.
but i'll never see the word 'badass' the same way again either way, so *shrugs*
8/23/2018 c2 Guest
Really crappy. Will not read ever again
Really crappy. Will not read ever again
8/23/2018 c2 Guest
...my guess is that you are a weeb (don't get me wrong, there is nothing wrong with being a weeb) who is trying to self-insert himself into a character (you know, the classic bamf, godlike, etc) but failed miserably and now has an asswipe of a character. You tried to fix it by giving him more power, and voilà! You now basically have a Gary stu oc who has a generic personality, supposed badassness, and the ego the size of Jupiter.
...do you know what character development is?
...my guess is that you are a weeb (don't get me wrong, there is nothing wrong with being a weeb) who is trying to self-insert himself into a character (you know, the classic bamf, godlike, etc) but failed miserably and now has an asswipe of a character. You tried to fix it by giving him more power, and voilà! You now basically have a Gary stu oc who has a generic personality, supposed badassness, and the ego the size of Jupiter.
...do you know what character development is?
7/16/2018 c25
1AsrielDreemr
Duuude I LOVE your story it’s hilarious and awesomely epic so keep up the good work -
E.N.D-Sama

Duuude I LOVE your story it’s hilarious and awesomely epic so keep up the good work -
E.N.D-Sama
4/17/2018 c25 Guest
CONTINUE PLEASEEE ITS SO FUNNY HAHAHA
CONTINUE PLEASEEE ITS SO FUNNY HAHAHA
2/20/2018 c1
40sKaEtrgrL
Ok let me just say that the prologue almost gave me a heart attack... it totally reminds me of how I tell my lil sis those kinds of stories where it’s like: hey there was this guy who got hit by a bus and died. The end... my sister would then complain for a real story lol... but I like the prologue so let’s see how far I get into this story yay! Ok I’ll shut up now cuz I’m probably annoying the living crap out of any new readers n stuff...

Ok let me just say that the prologue almost gave me a heart attack... it totally reminds me of how I tell my lil sis those kinds of stories where it’s like: hey there was this guy who got hit by a bus and died. The end... my sister would then complain for a real story lol... but I like the prologue so let’s see how far I get into this story yay! Ok I’ll shut up now cuz I’m probably annoying the living crap out of any new readers n stuff...