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3/31/2014 c1 Anon
hmm...The paragraphs hurts the eyes.
Maybe you could separate the sentences into one sentence per paragraph.
It would make it less confusing to read.
3/25/2014 c1 1A-Friend01
If you have suggestions you can speak up I might use the later own.

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