for Gohan's Redemption4/26/2016 c1 Guest
More please
More please
4/25/2016 c1 Guest
More
More
3/20/2016 c5 Guest
Please avoid making Gohan emo
After character development after harsh upbringing:
It would be interesting if had Gohan would be willing to Blow himself up and planet He is on he on because he would Rather Die and bring everyone with him then Be Collared and be made a Slave or Be Someone's Pet
You could make Child Gohan A Make Tsunadre that is somewhat Paraniod and Untrusting to those around him.
Please avoid making Gohan emo
After character development after harsh upbringing:
It would be interesting if had Gohan would be willing to Blow himself up and planet He is on he on because he would Rather Die and bring everyone with him then Be Collared and be made a Slave or Be Someone's Pet
You could make Child Gohan A Make Tsunadre that is somewhat Paraniod and Untrusting to those around him.
3/20/2016 c1 
8KingSora3
Poor Gohan *sob* kidnapped and taken away from his family only to be reunited with his father at the end.
8KingSora3Poor Gohan *sob* kidnapped and taken away from his family only to be reunited with his father at the end.
3/19/2016 c5 Guest
Mdhunter here. Good job with this chapter! Please continue with another one soon! Looking forward to it! Thanks, and have a great day!
Mdhunter here. Good job with this chapter! Please continue with another one soon! Looking forward to it! Thanks, and have a great day!
12/7/2015 c4 mdhunter111
Unusual twist to DBZ. Please continue soon. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks!
Unusual twist to DBZ. Please continue soon. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks!
6/14/2015 c4 3JoojooBrother
This is so painful to read I need to take breaks, and I mean that in a true emotional sense. Poor Gohan D':. What a brutal fic... can't wait for more! :D
3JoojooBrotherThis is so painful to read I need to take breaks, and I mean that in a true emotional sense. Poor Gohan D':. What a brutal fic... can't wait for more! :D
9/15/2014 c4 Eyea
Please update I want to see whats gunna happen
Please update I want to see whats gunna happen
7/23/2014 c4 Guest
I'am Glad Radiz is Dead. But i Shudder what will they do to a 4 Year old Gohan.
I'am Glad Radiz is Dead. But i Shudder what will they do to a 4 Year old Gohan.