3/27/2014 c1 2maxride08
Ahhh ha ha! I LOVED this!
Read it twice :P
Well written and I loved Winry teasing Ed.
Could there be a chance of a sequel? *hint hint*
Ahhh ha ha! I LOVED this!
Read it twice :P
Well written and I loved Winry teasing Ed.
Could there be a chance of a sequel? *hint hint*
3/25/2014 c1 24xIcyChanx
Oh my god I'm in love with this. The ending with Pinako was so unexpected I started laughing my ass off. XD Poor Ed, what will that old woman do to him now?! XDDDD
Oh my god I'm in love with this. The ending with Pinako was so unexpected I started laughing my ass off. XD Poor Ed, what will that old woman do to him now?! XDDDD
3/25/2014 c1 22BuggyNess
I do the same thing- get to the juicy bits and just can't "go there." Still, there's something to be said about writing the tension and alluding to it (then writing the elaborate stuff for yourself!). :). Nice EdxWin story!
I do the same thing- get to the juicy bits and just can't "go there." Still, there's something to be said about writing the tension and alluding to it (then writing the elaborate stuff for yourself!). :). Nice EdxWin story!
3/25/2014 c1 Spaghettifairy119
Hahaa! Yes! Gosh that almost made me blush;D I know what you mean though about writing smexyiness-I mean eek! They're weird to write! (But sooo worth the reviews O_O)
;D You did a really great job don't sweat the "wow she's soo mature* thing, cause that doesn't matter, your fanfics are great XD I love Ed's adorkableness:)
Hahaa! Yes! Gosh that almost made me blush;D I know what you mean though about writing smexyiness-I mean eek! They're weird to write! (But sooo worth the reviews O_O)
;D You did a really great job don't sweat the "wow she's soo mature* thing, cause that doesn't matter, your fanfics are great XD I love Ed's adorkableness:)