
2/11 c25
1TheWateringWizard
I can understand Luffy not wanting to show off too much of his strength in front Marines so that they don’t get hounded by super strong people but sometimes he keeps things like in canon for no reason. Take for example when he fell in Laboon’s stomach with Vivi and Igaram. Why didn’t he Geppo onto the ship? Another example: why did he let Sanji kick him and destroy the log pose ?
I get not wanting to cause too many ripples if you’re a time traveler but sometimes it just feels like laziness. The examples I speak about are small but they just make me think ‘why? What’s the point?’

I can understand Luffy not wanting to show off too much of his strength in front Marines so that they don’t get hounded by super strong people but sometimes he keeps things like in canon for no reason. Take for example when he fell in Laboon’s stomach with Vivi and Igaram. Why didn’t he Geppo onto the ship? Another example: why did he let Sanji kick him and destroy the log pose ?
I get not wanting to cause too many ripples if you’re a time traveler but sometimes it just feels like laziness. The examples I speak about are small but they just make me think ‘why? What’s the point?’
2/11 c23 TheWateringWizard
I’m guessing that Goa incident is something exclusive to this story since Luffy used Haki ? Anyway, it was interesting and you did get the snobby nobles right. Not that we needed it, considering all the bullshit from canon.
I’m guessing that Goa incident is something exclusive to this story since Luffy used Haki ? Anyway, it was interesting and you did get the snobby nobles right. Not that we needed it, considering all the bullshit from canon.
2/11 c18 TheWateringWizard
Love that Luffy just went straight to demolishing Arlong, no bullshit before
Love that Luffy just went straight to demolishing Arlong, no bullshit before
2/11 c17 TheWateringWizard
Okay my bad, I was stupid. Forgot Zoro, Usopp and Johnny left before Luffy in a different boat.
I hope Nojiko becomes part of the crew as well
Okay my bad, I was stupid. Forgot Zoro, Usopp and Johnny left before Luffy in a different boat.
I hope Nojiko becomes part of the crew as well
2/11 c16 TheWateringWizard
Okay this chapter was kinda of a mess. Some characters appear and disappear, the pace goes way too fast…
Where on earth did Luffy and Yosaku go ?! They’re mentioned at the start and then it’s only Zoro, Usopp and Johnny without any mention of where the other two went ?
Messy chapter for sure. Could’ve been split in two to slow down things a bit
Okay this chapter was kinda of a mess. Some characters appear and disappear, the pace goes way too fast…
Where on earth did Luffy and Yosaku go ?! They’re mentioned at the start and then it’s only Zoro, Usopp and Johnny without any mention of where the other two went ?
Messy chapter for sure. Could’ve been split in two to slow down things a bit
2/7 c14 TheWateringWizard
“Sanji!" Luffy yelled - he knows Sanji is going to be fine, why is he bothering to react like that, it’s useless…
Still not a fan of Gin as part of the Straw hat crew because his previous actions don’t make him worthy but I guess it’s already written so…
“Sanji!" Luffy yelled - he knows Sanji is going to be fine, why is he bothering to react like that, it’s useless…
Still not a fan of Gin as part of the Straw hat crew because his previous actions don’t make him worthy but I guess it’s already written so…
2/7 c13 TheWateringWizard
You could just have had Luffy end the battle quickly. Because now that Zoro fought Mihawk, there’s no much left to do and I don’t think the fights Sanji had in canon were that important or defining.
Because since Gin behaved like he did in canon, I struggle with understanding why would Luffy want him on his crew. Even if things had changed, I don’t understand at all why would Luffy want Gin? He’s not that strong or impressive so why ? If you want to expand the crew, bring Nojiko, Vivi and her Duck, some Baroque Works members like Miss Valentine or Goldenweek or Bentham. There’s so many other people they met that would be a better fit that Gin.
And now that he’s behaved like that…
You could just have had Luffy end the battle quickly. Because now that Zoro fought Mihawk, there’s no much left to do and I don’t think the fights Sanji had in canon were that important or defining.
Because since Gin behaved like he did in canon, I struggle with understanding why would Luffy want him on his crew. Even if things had changed, I don’t understand at all why would Luffy want Gin? He’s not that strong or impressive so why ? If you want to expand the crew, bring Nojiko, Vivi and her Duck, some Baroque Works members like Miss Valentine or Goldenweek or Bentham. There’s so many other people they met that would be a better fit that Gin.
And now that he’s behaved like that…
2/7 c12 TheWateringWizard
Baratie is not my favourite arc of the manga so glad things are moving along quickly. There’s indeed not much to change
Baratie is not my favourite arc of the manga so glad things are moving along quickly. There’s indeed not much to change
2/6 c11 TheWateringWizard
Ohh so Gin’s gonna join the crew too ? Gotta change some of his actions from the Baratie arc because otherwise he’s not really a great guy
Ohh so Gin’s gonna join the crew too ? Gotta change some of his actions from the Baratie arc because otherwise he’s not really a great guy
2/6 c9 TheWateringWizard
Good thing that Luffy is teaching them about Haki so soon, the earlier they know about it and start training, the better
Good thing that Luffy is teaching them about Haki so soon, the earlier they know about it and start training, the better
1/31 c110 GJMARX072
This One Piece fic is 1 of the best I've read in a long time. I wouldn't be surprised if you were to tell me you help make the characters. The chapters are short but I was amazed to see how well they kept up with was going on.
This One Piece fic is 1 of the best I've read in a long time. I wouldn't be surprised if you were to tell me you help make the characters. The chapters are short but I was amazed to see how well they kept up with was going on.