for Luffy's Renewed Adventure7/19/2022 c47 Guest
I wonder if there's gonnah be a Luffy vivi lemon
I wonder if there's gonnah be a Luffy vivi lemon
6/30/2022 c22 
2Schlepian
Well I dont understand the point of this story so far, going back in time as a super OP and changing absolutely nothing except being horny?
Maybe more changes in the future but looking at the titles it seems like not much at all.
2SchlepianWell I dont understand the point of this story so far, going back in time as a super OP and changing absolutely nothing except being horny?
Maybe more changes in the future but looking at the titles it seems like not much at all.
6/19/2022 c2 Guest
Low-key... Ruined it with the whole "opened your eyes to women" bullcrap. Lemme guess. A harem or some junk? ... Great... Because Luffy of all people needs one of those... All 'cause people can't accept the fact that women isn't always the first thing on mind for main characters... Especially for Monkey D. Luffy.
Low-key... Ruined it with the whole "opened your eyes to women" bullcrap. Lemme guess. A harem or some junk? ... Great... Because Luffy of all people needs one of those... All 'cause people can't accept the fact that women isn't always the first thing on mind for main characters... Especially for Monkey D. Luffy.
6/14/2022 c52 Guest
Yeah this scene literally makes you the trashiest author on the planet, and i seriously need you to quit writing if you cant even make your story have logical sense in it. Like how is a Luffy thats from the past basically at the end which means OPNESS and even has more training after asking garp for it, lose that fight? Trash
Yeah this scene literally makes you the trashiest author on the planet, and i seriously need you to quit writing if you cant even make your story have logical sense in it. Like how is a Luffy thats from the past basically at the end which means OPNESS and even has more training after asking garp for it, lose that fight? Trash
6/13/2022 c43 Guest
If tou write a harem fic expect to write lemons. If you dont write lemons in a harem fic then dont even write the fic cause your just wasting peoples time
If tou write a harem fic expect to write lemons. If you dont write lemons in a harem fic then dont even write the fic cause your just wasting peoples time
6/10/2022 c115 Joseph Guidry
Honestly, hope the rewrite is going well. This is one story I find myself coming back to every once in awhile.
Looking forward to seeing the rewrite when it comes out.
Honestly, hope the rewrite is going well. This is one story I find myself coming back to every once in awhile.
Looking forward to seeing the rewrite when it comes out.
6/7/2022 c87 Guest
I like it. Too much sex tho it inturrupts your story. Read it a few times but skipping the sex scenes gets to be too much
I like it. Too much sex tho it inturrupts your story. Read it a few times but skipping the sex scenes gets to be too much
6/6/2022 c115 Rdizzal
i love this story its getting harder to find good one piece story that the writer just stop so when your remake of this story come out i can't wait to see how you do it
i love this story its getting harder to find good one piece story that the writer just stop so when your remake of this story come out i can't wait to see how you do it
6/5/2022 c1 Ahfucjcb
Honest question is this still under rewrite or just abandoned?
I love this story and was just curious if you would ever get back in to it.
Honest question is this still under rewrite or just abandoned?
I love this story and was just curious if you would ever get back in to it.
6/5/2022 c115 8Cloud Narukami
Overall this was pretty good, definitely wish there was actual romance and more than just sex cause lets be honest they were just sex friends not exactly a poly relationship like dating or anything.
8Cloud NarukamiOverall this was pretty good, definitely wish there was actual romance and more than just sex cause lets be honest they were just sex friends not exactly a poly relationship like dating or anything.
6/1/2022 c1 Arywson Fernandes
Would be good if it wasn’t exactly like the anime like how luffy this strong and loses to crocodile still I just feel like it’s lazy work
Would be good if it wasn’t exactly like the anime like how luffy this strong and loses to crocodile still I just feel like it’s lazy work
4/22/2022 c53 1Arthursius
Ok just needed to throw this out there but you rely way to heavily on the original plot. Yes, a lot of the stuff you said would have thrown off the original plot, HOWEVER the fact that luffy has more crew with him already should have thrown that plot out the window. Not to mention his higher bounty, the fact that he knows haki, and the fact that he came out of most of his battles without a scratch. Most of the reason luffy was underestimated early on was because of his small crew and his lack of haki. Remember in marineford it was said that he HAD to die BECAUSE he had conquers haki and he didn't even know how to use it back then. People don't underestimate guys that have conquers haki period. I like that you've added to the crew and the whole tragic time traveler theme is fine. But God damnit im 50 chapters in and you've barely budged from the main plot
1ArthursiusOk just needed to throw this out there but you rely way to heavily on the original plot. Yes, a lot of the stuff you said would have thrown off the original plot, HOWEVER the fact that luffy has more crew with him already should have thrown that plot out the window. Not to mention his higher bounty, the fact that he knows haki, and the fact that he came out of most of his battles without a scratch. Most of the reason luffy was underestimated early on was because of his small crew and his lack of haki. Remember in marineford it was said that he HAD to die BECAUSE he had conquers haki and he didn't even know how to use it back then. People don't underestimate guys that have conquers haki period. I like that you've added to the crew and the whole tragic time traveler theme is fine. But God damnit im 50 chapters in and you've barely budged from the main plot