for Luffy's Renewed Adventure1/26/2022 c52 Guest
This is horrible you just follow canon like a sheep you suck as an author. Luffy shouldve easily kicked crocs ass. This is dumb asf
This is horrible you just follow canon like a sheep you suck as an author. Luffy shouldve easily kicked crocs ass. This is dumb asf
1/26/2022 c52 Guest
Okay this is literally just canon story with your dumbass opions and little side changes. The luffy your trying to display shouldve easy kicked crocs ass but no its going to follow the same agit
Okay this is literally just canon story with your dumbass opions and little side changes. The luffy your trying to display shouldve easy kicked crocs ass but no its going to follow the same agit
1/28/2022 c3 DevilishPotato
I'm not feeling it. it's almost the same thing, will this go on in the later chapters?
I'm not feeling it. it's almost the same thing, will this go on in the later chapters?
1/7/2022 c115 EnticingR
You are amazing. And so is this story. Don’t let the hurtful comments tell you otherwise. They just want to feel like they’re smart and better than you by making indecent criticisms in the form of insults. If you believe that any of their harsh comments are right, then go look at the works they’ve written on their profile. They’ve probably done nothing. And if they’ve done anything, then all their works together most likely don’t have half the word count you have here. Who are they to critique you? They apparently enjoyed it enough to read through the whole thing!
You are amazing. And so is this story. Don’t let the hurtful comments tell you otherwise. They just want to feel like they’re smart and better than you by making indecent criticisms in the form of insults. If you believe that any of their harsh comments are right, then go look at the works they’ve written on their profile. They’ve probably done nothing. And if they’ve done anything, then all their works together most likely don’t have half the word count you have here. Who are they to critique you? They apparently enjoyed it enough to read through the whole thing!
1/7/2022 c113 EnticingR
You’ve done a fantastic job with this story. It makes me sad to see you’re rewriting it, but I’m happy to wait and see what kind of improvements you will do to this work!
You’ve done a fantastic job with this story. It makes me sad to see you’re rewriting it, but I’m happy to wait and see what kind of improvements you will do to this work!
12/25/2021 c115 smgking
Just read this story through for the third or fourth time, can’t wait for the rewrite, hope all is well
Just read this story through for the third or fourth time, can’t wait for the rewrite, hope all is well
12/17/2021 c24 Guest
Alvida's goal is a bit silly and I fail to see what adding Nikijo will bring to the table but it's great so far
Alvida's goal is a bit silly and I fail to see what adding Nikijo will bring to the table but it's great so far
12/17/2021 c20 Guest
This is exactly like returning to the second town in pokemon and fighting an npc that thinks he's gonna crush your lvl 72 charizard with his lvl 16 megapod
This is exactly like returning to the second town in pokemon and fighting an npc that thinks he's gonna crush your lvl 72 charizard with his lvl 16 megapod
12/17/2021 c15 Guest
Damn. Don Krieg has unshakeable confidence. He can take two dozen Ls in a row, get curbstomped and still go on about being the strongest. Also using Rod Hawk was so overkill, normal Haki punch would have been enough
Damn. Don Krieg has unshakeable confidence. He can take two dozen Ls in a row, get curbstomped and still go on about being the strongest. Also using Rod Hawk was so overkill, normal Haki punch would have been enough
12/17/2021 c14 Guest
I completely forgot about Gin. Guess he's gonna join the crew this time around
I completely forgot about Gin. Guess he's gonna join the crew this time around
12/17/2021 c11 Guest
Two people? Sanji and who else?
Two people? Sanji and who else?
12/16/2021 c10 Guest
Man I love some of early One Piece inconsistency with the fragility of human beings. Kuina dies by falling Down D. Stairs and Kaya gets bedridden from losing her parents lol
Also Kuro's was probably the worst in the entire series lol
Man I love some of early One Piece inconsistency with the fragility of human beings. Kuina dies by falling Down D. Stairs and Kaya gets bedridden from losing her parents lol
Also Kuro's was probably the worst in the entire series lol
12/15/2021 c2 Guest
So Garp didn't notice Luffy has years of haki experience as well as a massive scar on his chest? And possibly other scars as well that he didn't have before?
So Garp didn't notice Luffy has years of haki experience as well as a massive scar on his chest? And possibly other scars as well that he didn't have before?