for Luffy's Renewed Adventure5/13/2024 c116 Vin
I apologize on behalf of my fellow readers for any nasty comment sent your way. Some people should really adhere to the old saying 'if you have nothing nice to say, don't say anything at all'.
I'd also like to add that it's perfectly normal for there to be little change to the adventure, as Luffy & Co are still going the same route and meeting the same people as before. The REAL change will begin at Sabaody since I don't think the 2 year time skip will happen again.
I apologize on behalf of my fellow readers for any nasty comment sent your way. Some people should really adhere to the old saying 'if you have nothing nice to say, don't say anything at all'.
I'd also like to add that it's perfectly normal for there to be little change to the adventure, as Luffy & Co are still going the same route and meeting the same people as before. The REAL change will begin at Sabaody since I don't think the 2 year time skip will happen again.
4/23/2024 c63 erasenpai946
I must be the only reader who doesn't find the whole thing funny about Sanji getting mad at Luffy.
I must be the only reader who doesn't find the whole thing funny about Sanji getting mad at Luffy.
4/23/2024 c51 erasenpai946
Luffy has already lived through all this and knows what's going to happen and even so, he doesn't do anything to avoid it (this whole moment in the cage could have been avoided by him) he loses little of the advantage he should have had by going back in time
Luffy has already lived through all this and knows what's going to happen and even so, he doesn't do anything to avoid it (this whole moment in the cage could have been avoided by him) he loses little of the advantage he should have had by going back in time
4/20/2024 c116 
1Har Cj
The issue of rewriting is really a bit annoying, since for tastes, colors and all thatAlthough you have received a lot of criticism, there are also many who support you, I have to say that I really like the direction that the story was taking, very faithful to the original story with the little well introduced, I'm not a big fan of lemons but they were still good Good luck with the rewriting and I hope you get to the point where you left off so you can pick it up again. 3.
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1Har CjThe issue of rewriting is really a bit annoying, since for tastes, colors and all thatAlthough you have received a lot of criticism, there are also many who support you, I have to say that I really like the direction that the story was taking, very faithful to the original story with the little well introduced, I'm not a big fan of lemons but they were still good Good luck with the rewriting and I hope you get to the point where you left off so you can pick it up again. 3.
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4/16/2024 c34 erasenpai946
Luffy going back in time is useless, he knows what's going to happen and has the strength to avoid it but he doesn't avoid anything, he lets everything happen like it happened last time
Luffy going back in time is useless, he knows what's going to happen and has the strength to avoid it but he doesn't avoid anything, he lets everything happen like it happened last time
3/24/2024 c2 tylor13roney
dont forget to open his mind to bloody common sense and maybe some intelligence
dont forget to open his mind to bloody common sense and maybe some intelligence
3/16/2024 c6 rhandson.ghost
this fanfic is ridiculous, you really are copying every line of one piece instead of writing your own
this fanfic is ridiculous, you really are copying every line of one piece instead of writing your own
3/13/2024 c116 daniel2610994
Meh understandable man, oda has gone all out with info, lore and action, lots and lots of action, I mean for fuck sake luffy is against the big five currently so I can only imagine how difficult it will be to write a good going back in time story.
Meh understandable man, oda has gone all out with info, lore and action, lots and lots of action, I mean for fuck sake luffy is against the big five currently so I can only imagine how difficult it will be to write a good going back in time story.
3/7/2024 c116 Maelstrom Resurrected
Well its a good thing that our author is not a lolicon. That would've been really awkward!
Well its a good thing that our author is not a lolicon. That would've been really awkward!
3/6/2024 c116 Delta3950
That spoiler about Jewelry Bonney is funny, I had no idea that she was well and truly just a brat. Her devil fruit must be the age age fruit or something. BTW part of me doesn't care what other people think about this story I actually miss it but do hope you're able to get it figured out eventually.
That spoiler about Jewelry Bonney is funny, I had no idea that she was well and truly just a brat. Her devil fruit must be the age age fruit or something. BTW part of me doesn't care what other people think about this story I actually miss it but do hope you're able to get it figured out eventually.
3/3/2024 c116 Razorback
Surprised actually that you came back, look man I do miss this story but don't force yourself. I am so sorry for all the negative shit people say man. If you don't wanna do this than don't.
Hope you will be okay man and yeah, everybody felt so fucking awkward after finding out about Bonney's age like all that fanfiction in the past man.
Surprised actually that you came back, look man I do miss this story but don't force yourself. I am so sorry for all the negative shit people say man. If you don't wanna do this than don't.
Hope you will be okay man and yeah, everybody felt so fucking awkward after finding out about Bonney's age like all that fanfiction in the past man.
3/3/2024 c116 whindman
So been awhile since I read this and honestly while I haven't read the other reviews I will say it's interesting to me at least as while I may not have made it past the alabasta arc in the show I found you take on it entire story well written, don't let the hate keep you down can't wait to see what the rewrite comes out as
So been awhile since I read this and honestly while I haven't read the other reviews I will say it's interesting to me at least as while I may not have made it past the alabasta arc in the show I found you take on it entire story well written, don't let the hate keep you down can't wait to see what the rewrite comes out as
2/27/2024 c116 17AeroJester203
LOL, I just imagined Sanji trying to woo Jewelry Bonnie just so Luffy “won’t get this one”, only for his flirting to go over her head every time. And if he ever found out her actual age, any hearts would abruptly pop as he feels that mortification you described.
17AeroJester203LOL, I just imagined Sanji trying to woo Jewelry Bonnie just so Luffy “won’t get this one”, only for his flirting to go over her head every time. And if he ever found out her actual age, any hearts would abruptly pop as he feels that mortification you described.