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8/4/2019 c2 Janine
This is fantastic. I can’t wait for more!
7/7/2016 c2 anon
hey im doing a production of urinetown and i would really like to see a new chapter from this :) its p good
4/25/2016 c2 2Cladwell
My favorite thing about this chapter is the dialogue. It's so spot on and distinct. Awesome! (Sorry for my lack of articulation.)
2/18/2016 c1 Guest
MAKE ANOTHER ONE
4/4/2014 c1 RKB
This seems like a very promising story. I suggest that you might want to break up some of the paragraphs though, just to make sure that it reads easier. The spelling is mostly good with the occasional typo and the characters seem to be in character, but you might want to...I don't know...alter your sentence structure a little bit. The pace of the writing seems to flow a little too quickly at times, and I get the feeling that in some areas you are starting to border on being redundant. Shorter sentences and paragraphs might help with that.

That being said this is obviously something you put a great deal of effort in, which shows. It just needs a good rewrite. I look forward to seeing how your other chapters develop. Thank you for sharing this.

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