for The Parking Garage1/22/2015 c1 Guest
Whoa. Well done
Whoa. Well done
8/3/2014 c1 Yido87
Your Story is good and very emotional, but I'm very very happy it is not the real series story. Really very sad.
Your Story is good and very emotional, but I'm very very happy it is not the real series story. Really very sad.
4/15/2014 c1 
2Stealheart7
This is great but do you think you could continue with the rest of Cyber Com dinging out about their deaths? Pretty please.
2Stealheart7This is great but do you think you could continue with the rest of Cyber Com dinging out about their deaths? Pretty please.
4/5/2014 c1 11AxJJ
I like it, but i dont necessarily think Lillian would drop to the ground, but her dialogue was on point.
11AxJJI like it, but i dont necessarily think Lillian would drop to the ground, but her dialogue was on point.
3/30/2014 c1 1aphotic angel
The first time I read this i didnt notice it was a tragedy. I know I should have totally payed more attention. I usually hate tragedies but this one I love sooo much. This will forever be the one tragedy i love and will read over and over even though its sad and heartbreaking.
1aphotic angelThe first time I read this i didnt notice it was a tragedy. I know I should have totally payed more attention. I usually hate tragedies but this one I love sooo much. This will forever be the one tragedy i love and will read over and over even though its sad and heartbreaking.
3/29/2014 c1 Ally
I'm going to have to go hide in a corner and cry now... Short and bittersweet. Nice job!
I'm going to have to go hide in a corner and cry now... Short and bittersweet. Nice job!
3/29/2014 c1 Alesia
i really liked it :)
i really liked it :)
3/28/2014 c1 Jackii
Can you make a chapter on how everyone is cyber com is doing following their deaths.
Can you make a chapter on how everyone is cyber com is doing following their deaths.
3/28/2014 c1 2kateanneshepherd
I LOVED it!
I think these things have to be written sometimes and you did it beautifully :)
2kateanneshepherdI LOVED it!
I think these things have to be written sometimes and you did it beautifully :)
3/28/2014 c1 Careeseforever
I'm not crying. Just, lying in my bed making a pitifully sad squeaking noise because the tears don't want to come.
I'm not crying. Just, lying in my bed making a pitifully sad squeaking noise because the tears don't want to come.
3/28/2014 c1 Guest
WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT OMFG I AM CRYING YOU DONT UNDERSTAND I REALLY AM CRYING FUCK BUT IT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL FUCK FUCK FUCK
WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT OMFG I AM CRYING YOU DONT UNDERSTAND I REALLY AM CRYING FUCK BUT IT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL FUCK FUCK FUCK