for Mass Effect Pathways: Black Tides5/2/2021 c10 Ms. Sleepy Clover
Wait, Ria is only 15 years old and shes a Spectre? Laura and Tarran are only teens as well? Well then.
Romance can be pretty bad in stories if the author forces it. Its even worse when the author wants to ship their female OC(Ria) with the bad boy/misunderstood boy(Daron). That right their is worse than even OC x OC fanfics. And not to mention if Daron is an adult then that right their is Pedophilia.
Like seriously nothing pisses me off more than people who think we girls(True girls not those idiotic Cheerleader, Prom Queen types) love jocks/bad boys. Seriously, why would we like a guy who belittles and treats us like garbage?
Wait, Ria is only 15 years old and shes a Spectre? Laura and Tarran are only teens as well? Well then.
Romance can be pretty bad in stories if the author forces it. Its even worse when the author wants to ship their female OC(Ria) with the bad boy/misunderstood boy(Daron). That right their is worse than even OC x OC fanfics. And not to mention if Daron is an adult then that right their is Pedophilia.
Like seriously nothing pisses me off more than people who think we girls(True girls not those idiotic Cheerleader, Prom Queen types) love jocks/bad boys. Seriously, why would we like a guy who belittles and treats us like garbage?
11/11/2020 c33 Muramasa96
I just finish reading Mass Effect Pathways, and I’d loved it. will you ever continue this one? I’d liked the way you described the characters and the dialogues between the crewmates. Especially Ria.
I hope you will find the inspiration to continue it. Cheers
I just finish reading Mass Effect Pathways, and I’d loved it. will you ever continue this one? I’d liked the way you described the characters and the dialogues between the crewmates. Especially Ria.
I hope you will find the inspiration to continue it. Cheers
11/17/2018 c33 Guest
That was a nice trip from "The legacy of fire" to here. It was nice to see how much care was put in the evolution of the characters, it was nice to see the journey that Ria and his friends made. It's almost 3 years from Your last update of this story and i don't think that You will continue this fanfic...
Soo all i will say is thank you and all the people who works on this story.
Cheers
That was a nice trip from "The legacy of fire" to here. It was nice to see how much care was put in the evolution of the characters, it was nice to see the journey that Ria and his friends made. It's almost 3 years from Your last update of this story and i don't think that You will continue this fanfic...
Soo all i will say is thank you and all the people who works on this story.
Cheers
2/14/2016 c33 Jim
Still a really good read. Would like to see more frequent updates.
Still a really good read. Would like to see more frequent updates.
2/7/2016 c33 mordreek
Nice homage to one of the few good jokes in ME3 there. Good way to start the chapter.
Is the jacket going to happen? Cause that would be an awesome comedy moment.
Not that the story doesn't have them already with "Chaos, chaos everywhere" thanks to the Krogan on board and now the vorcha. I think part of what makes Kel swearing so funny is that we have to imagine what he's saying.
And the awkward mating dance going on here is just adorable, really well done combined with Ria feeling overwhelmed and scared...and then hungover. Those little monologues are always good for a chuckle.
I love the cliff hanger over the potential for something having come before the Reapers.
Nice homage to one of the few good jokes in ME3 there. Good way to start the chapter.
Is the jacket going to happen? Cause that would be an awesome comedy moment.
Not that the story doesn't have them already with "Chaos, chaos everywhere" thanks to the Krogan on board and now the vorcha. I think part of what makes Kel swearing so funny is that we have to imagine what he's saying.
And the awkward mating dance going on here is just adorable, really well done combined with Ria feeling overwhelmed and scared...and then hungover. Those little monologues are always good for a chuckle.
I love the cliff hanger over the potential for something having come before the Reapers.
10/23/2015 c32 Possy-esed
Don't normally get to comment but I really do like the overall story you have going. Especially this one, I can certainly imagine the hangar thanks to the detail you have and I really like that the "teasing banter" was minimized to further note the severity of the situation the group was in.
Keep up the good work, can't wait to read the next chapter.
Don't normally get to comment but I really do like the overall story you have going. Especially this one, I can certainly imagine the hangar thanks to the detail you have and I really like that the "teasing banter" was minimized to further note the severity of the situation the group was in.
Keep up the good work, can't wait to read the next chapter.
10/14/2015 c32 
2Porygonman
Damn, I've got to say, stuff this good is hard to come by these days. You've got real talent. This story is amazing and us fans fully support your work! Besides, with N7 day coming soon, whi knows if we'll get more MEA news! Anyway, thanks for the amazing work and time you put into this, and keep on!
2PorygonmanDamn, I've got to say, stuff this good is hard to come by these days. You've got real talent. This story is amazing and us fans fully support your work! Besides, with N7 day coming soon, whi knows if we'll get more MEA news! Anyway, thanks for the amazing work and time you put into this, and keep on!
10/11/2015 c32 mordreek
"RUNNING AWAY! RUNNING AWAY!"..."Screw this, call me a cab.", that's basically the impression of this chapter in a nutshell. A nice, fast paced escape scene with good tension but still keeping it clear to the reader that our favs aren't going to die.
"RUNNING AWAY! RUNNING AWAY!"..."Screw this, call me a cab.", that's basically the impression of this chapter in a nutshell. A nice, fast paced escape scene with good tension but still keeping it clear to the reader that our favs aren't going to die.
10/5/2015 c31 Porygonman
Great job with these series, they're great. You're one of the best writers I've seen. It's probably too late now, and I know this is out of the blue, but for all the people that enjoyed this series, and enjoyed reading it, I ask of you, PLEASE finish it. I need to know what happened and I'm not going anywhere. So if you do ever read this, I beg you, finish this one thing for us. Please?
Anyway, great job, I hope you can one day use your talents to write more things. Take care.
Your recent fan,
Porygonman
Great job with these series, they're great. You're one of the best writers I've seen. It's probably too late now, and I know this is out of the blue, but for all the people that enjoyed this series, and enjoyed reading it, I ask of you, PLEASE finish it. I need to know what happened and I'm not going anywhere. So if you do ever read this, I beg you, finish this one thing for us. Please?
Anyway, great job, I hope you can one day use your talents to write more things. Take care.
Your recent fan,
Porygonman
8/12/2015 c30 1Admiral Anderson
Don't worry about taking your time, you've put a lot of hard work in this story so far and it really shows;)
1Admiral AndersonDon't worry about taking your time, you've put a lot of hard work in this story so far and it really shows;)
8/6/2015 c30 Jim
As always, I'm really enjoying this story.
As always, I'm really enjoying this story.