for Fight for Survival11/1/2017 c11 KillShotGaming
Make more chapters make one where Jason and them meet Christa and omid and go to Savannah
Make more chapters make one where Jason and them meet Christa and omid and go to Savannah
8/19/2015 c11 timothy.nguyen.73
3.2/5rating
Your story is kinda getting predictable now after Marks death...
3.2/5rating
Your story is kinda getting predictable now after Marks death...
1/31/2015 c11 
7TheIdiocyWizard
So far this is great and I'm really likening it and I can't wait to see more. There are, however, some grammatical errors. The biggest one being how you keep saying, "Hay" instead of "Hey". But other than that this is pretty good. I also can't wait until this group really finally meets up with Ricks group. Hope you update soon.
7TheIdiocyWizardSo far this is great and I'm really likening it and I can't wait to see more. There are, however, some grammatical errors. The biggest one being how you keep saying, "Hay" instead of "Hey". But other than that this is pretty good. I also can't wait until this group really finally meets up with Ricks group. Hope you update soon.
12/30/2014 c11 BloodMoonWanes
I'm loving your story, I'm loving the Jason/clementine/Carley relationships, that part of the episode broke my heart. What I love about the games is that it shows you what Rick kinda goes through, you have to make decisions for the group and whatever you decide will determine the fate of the group and it's stressful. Keep it up.
I'm loving your story, I'm loving the Jason/clementine/Carley relationships, that part of the episode broke my heart. What I love about the games is that it shows you what Rick kinda goes through, you have to make decisions for the group and whatever you decide will determine the fate of the group and it's stressful. Keep it up.
12/4/2014 c11 2Dablackwyrm
oh man... this is even more impactful than original version... this could not have been an easy choice
2Dablackwyrmoh man... this is even more impactful than original version... this could not have been an easy choice
12/4/2014 c11 Hercules8
Hard truth man. Keep up the amazing work!
Hard truth man. Keep up the amazing work!
12/3/2014 c11 SRPA Sentinel
Very nice chapter, i always felt bad about Duck. he didn't deserve what happened to him, can't wait for the next chapter.
Very nice chapter, i always felt bad about Duck. he didn't deserve what happened to him, can't wait for the next chapter.
11/30/2014 c10 Hercules8
Can't wait to see more! Hope Jason can forgive Ben? The kid was just scared. Can't really blame him when bandits are threatening him.
Can't wait to see more! Hope Jason can forgive Ben? The kid was just scared. Can't really blame him when bandits are threatening him.
11/30/2014 c5 Hercules8
Wow, the story is awesome so far. I like how you have change the story a little from the game which is good, because some choices weren't so great. Keep up the great work! :D
Wow, the story is awesome so far. I like how you have change the story a little from the game which is good, because some choices weren't so great. Keep up the great work! :D
11/30/2014 c1 Hercules8
Another amazing story man! I'm glad I decided to read this story, I love martial arts and mix martial arts, and it's so awesome when you have training that you can take on anything. Though that might be the action movies talking. Anyway AWESOME STORY! :)
Another amazing story man! I'm glad I decided to read this story, I love martial arts and mix martial arts, and it's so awesome when you have training that you can take on anything. Though that might be the action movies talking. Anyway AWESOME STORY! :)
11/26/2014 c10 Tactus501st
Duuudddeeee! Best cliffhanger ever love it want more must have more gaaaaaawwwwwww
I'm ubber excited can't wait for the next chapter man great story
Duuudddeeee! Best cliffhanger ever love it want more must have more gaaaaaawwwwwww
I'm ubber excited can't wait for the next chapter man great story