for Dragon Age: Dovahkiin7/22/2015 c9 Guest
Great upateXD!
Great upateXD!
7/22/2015 c9 LostSoulWeeping
Please for the love of god find some way to get rid of Leliana. I understand the way your doing the character (which is good in all honesty) but I never could stand her in-game. she was to annoying.
Please for the love of god find some way to get rid of Leliana. I understand the way your doing the character (which is good in all honesty) but I never could stand her in-game. she was to annoying.
7/22/2015 c9 polarpwnage
They're just constantly stating shocked. Wonder how the Sister wold react when she summons a daedric prince
They're just constantly stating shocked. Wonder how the Sister wold react when she summons a daedric prince
7/22/2015 c9 Eadane
Man I really like your stories, keep up the good work. I am very interested in seeing the interaction with not only the elves but with the circle as well.
Man I really like your stories, keep up the good work. I am very interested in seeing the interaction with not only the elves but with the circle as well.
7/22/2015 c9 
4Lady of the Mays
I do so love your work, please keep it up. I can't wait to see what happens when Zeveran shows up! That will be one help of a chapter.
4Lady of the MaysI do so love your work, please keep it up. I can't wait to see what happens when Zeveran shows up! That will be one help of a chapter.
7/22/2015 c7 Sagnus
Just a thought but am I the only one seeing a similarity between the creators (as DA:I depicts them) and the tribunal?
Elves powerful enough to be considered gods but not really in the same league as the daedric princes. At least that's how it seems to me.
Perhaps other bits of dead god lying around nirn to leech power from? Just an idea.
Just a thought but am I the only one seeing a similarity between the creators (as DA:I depicts them) and the tribunal?
Elves powerful enough to be considered gods but not really in the same league as the daedric princes. At least that's how it seems to me.
Perhaps other bits of dead god lying around nirn to leech power from? Just an idea.
7/7/2015 c8 HaywireEagle
Honestly. The whole thing feels a bit stretched thin to be honest. No offense or anything, but your Dovahkiin is also more than a bit over the top and yawn worthy.
Honestly. The whole thing feels a bit stretched thin to be honest. No offense or anything, but your Dovahkiin is also more than a bit over the top and yawn worthy.
7/2/2015 c8 11Drgyen
Honestly, I think you are incorporating TOO MUCH from the game. I mean focusing on those side quests is frankly tedious and not overall life changing to your story. Plus I am irked by you re-using too much game dialogues. You're not being too original about it of this habits keep coming up.
11DrgyenHonestly, I think you are incorporating TOO MUCH from the game. I mean focusing on those side quests is frankly tedious and not overall life changing to your story. Plus I am irked by you re-using too much game dialogues. You're not being too original about it of this habits keep coming up.
7/1/2015 c8 Guest
My interest is seeying miaras reaction to thw werewolfs and lady of the forest. It would be interesting to see
My interest is seeying miaras reaction to thw werewolfs and lady of the forest. It would be interesting to see
7/1/2015 c8 Guest
Her father is the Nerevarine! That makes so much more since the her dragon blood protecting her from the blight. Its to bad she doesn't seem to have corpus's other enhancements, though its hard to tell she's done little things her and there. This story just got much more interesting.
Her father is the Nerevarine! That makes so much more since the her dragon blood protecting her from the blight. Its to bad she doesn't seem to have corpus's other enhancements, though its hard to tell she's done little things her and there. This story just got much more interesting.
6/29/2015 c8 KingArthur3
Needed funds? Did Miara not bring any funds? And I though when when she met Bryan coils and the differences in currency had already cleared up.
Needed funds? Did Miara not bring any funds? And I though when when she met Bryan coils and the differences in currency had already cleared up.
6/29/2015 c8 13The Flying Frog
Very nice. I greatly enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to how all these characters will get along with each other.
Now, who are these people plotting in the shadows? It's also nice that I can't tell if Loghain will be "mwahaha evil" or the paranoid general who made a very hard decision, and I think that's a good thing. I'm glad you guys took into account that the beacon was late. According to the developers, it was actually over an hour late, and the four floors we played in-game represented a lot more.
13The Flying FrogVery nice. I greatly enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to how all these characters will get along with each other.
Now, who are these people plotting in the shadows? It's also nice that I can't tell if Loghain will be "mwahaha evil" or the paranoid general who made a very hard decision, and I think that's a good thing. I'm glad you guys took into account that the beacon was late. According to the developers, it was actually over an hour late, and the four floors we played in-game represented a lot more.
6/29/2015 c8 knight of Eclipse
I have a strong suspicion that either the Thalmor or Corypheus is going to be involved.
I have a strong suspicion that either the Thalmor or Corypheus is going to be involved.