for Dragon Age: Dovahkiin4/16/2017 c15 Guest
I love this story! continue please!
I love this story! continue please!
2/3/2017 c3 Jose19
I see a big problem with the Dragonborn depicted in this story she is affiliated with the Dark Brotherhood of Assassins making her literally into a villain because the souls she takes go towards the service of a Evil God, and she can never be considered a good person, and Azura by the way wouldn't tolerate having a servant that serves Silthis who is a enemy of her.
I see a big problem with the Dragonborn depicted in this story she is affiliated with the Dark Brotherhood of Assassins making her literally into a villain because the souls she takes go towards the service of a Evil God, and she can never be considered a good person, and Azura by the way wouldn't tolerate having a servant that serves Silthis who is a enemy of her.
1/16/2017 c15 Guest
I love this story it's awesome keep up the good work
I love this story it's awesome keep up the good work
12/20/2016 c15 GreedyDragoon9791
Love your story and how detailed your characters are. But ah, I found one small bug:
"Miara and Miraak locked themselves in cataclysmic duel. Spells of immense powerful were hurled at each other in such a close distance it made the others wonder how they hadn't been torn to shreds by now. "
I think you meant to say "immense power," not "immense powerful."
Other than that, amazing and wonderful as always! Can't wait for the next update.
Love your story and how detailed your characters are. But ah, I found one small bug:
"Miara and Miraak locked themselves in cataclysmic duel. Spells of immense powerful were hurled at each other in such a close distance it made the others wonder how they hadn't been torn to shreds by now. "
I think you meant to say "immense power," not "immense powerful."
Other than that, amazing and wonderful as always! Can't wait for the next update.
12/18/2016 c15 
4halo is bad ass
*How in the hell do Serana and i get out of here?*
Through faith, trust, and pikia dust... also a portal will do.
4halo is bad ass*How in the hell do Serana and i get out of here?*
Through faith, trust, and pikia dust... also a portal will do.
12/17/2016 c15 Guest
Looking forward to the next chapter
Looking forward to the next chapter
12/16/2016 c15 9JimmyHall24
You can say a lot about Miraak.. But he was right when talking about the Circle and Templars.
9JimmyHall24You can say a lot about Miraak.. But he was right when talking about the Circle and Templars.
12/15/2016 c15 6MEleeSmasher
I hope Azura appears in the next chapter. That is something I would love to see, mommy dearest coming to aid her wayward child home.
6MEleeSmasherI hope Azura appears in the next chapter. That is something I would love to see, mommy dearest coming to aid her wayward child home.
12/15/2016 c15 1Rotrox
I love each and every one of your chapters of this. And i cant wait for the reactions of the others to all that has happened.
1RotroxI love each and every one of your chapters of this. And i cant wait for the reactions of the others to all that has happened.
12/15/2016 c15 The Crimson Thief
This chapter was fantastic! Every moment was thrilling, I loved the battle with Miraak, you are a artist of words, loved this chapter. Fantastic, and superb. Seriously looking forward to reading the next chapter, and the following ones.
This chapter was fantastic! Every moment was thrilling, I loved the battle with Miraak, you are a artist of words, loved this chapter. Fantastic, and superb. Seriously looking forward to reading the next chapter, and the following ones.
12/15/2016 c15 Guest
That was epic the power behind this chapter is unfathomable.
That was epic the power behind this chapter is unfathomable.