for Dragon Age: Dovahkiin8/1/2016 c13 Guest
WHY hasn't this updated yet!?
WHY hasn't this updated yet!?
7/16/2016 c13 Akshka
Plz update I like this story alot
Plz update I like this story alot
6/23/2016 c13 Guest
Well feast then! Anyways I never played dragon age but the things they do! I kinda want to go thier with my dragonborb (a dark elf too) and kill these tools! Very few people in fiction I want to kill this bad. Thalmor, Miranda from ME 2, that prick in white run, Mr. 'Buzz buzz go way little fly', Ulfric, (a lot of skyrim people!), every on in diamond city (uptight pricks) and many others but anyways like your story waiting for a update.
Well feast then! Anyways I never played dragon age but the things they do! I kinda want to go thier with my dragonborb (a dark elf too) and kill these tools! Very few people in fiction I want to kill this bad. Thalmor, Miranda from ME 2, that prick in white run, Mr. 'Buzz buzz go way little fly', Ulfric, (a lot of skyrim people!), every on in diamond city (uptight pricks) and many others but anyways like your story waiting for a update.
6/7/2016 c13 Akshka
Please don't be dead this is a good story and such talent should not be wasted
Please don't be dead this is a good story and such talent should not be wasted
4/22/2016 c13 Badak
You know i was all for this story up until you decided to bring in Miraak, this is a huge mistake and i think he should be left out.
You know i was all for this story up until you decided to bring in Miraak, this is a huge mistake and i think he should be left out.
94/12/2016 c2 Blinded in a bolthole
- Gods help those who help themselves. And curing vampirism of the kind that High Priest of Auriel was afflicted with was well within mortal means. If the man was so lazy and conceited as to not try and help himself how he could expect help from his god? It shows a disturbing lack of faith when a bit of hardship turns a High Priest into raving lunatic hell-bent on damning the whole world in his temper tantrum. (I blame God Emperor of Mankind for this rant)
- More like less manly than weak. After all Nords do consider Voice to be badass (probably because of the whole booming thunder voice of most Shouts).
- It could be worse. Qunari for example are rather hell-bent on maintaining their caste system and brainwashing everyone into it. No personal identity or even names.
- Based on Mister "Cheesy Villian" from DA:I Ysmir's guess is probably right.
- I would just make a thrall out of the giant prick... or use Sign of Quen on him and convince him to commit suicide in some spectacular fashion.
- Gods help those who help themselves. And curing vampirism of the kind that High Priest of Auriel was afflicted with was well within mortal means. If the man was so lazy and conceited as to not try and help himself how he could expect help from his god? It shows a disturbing lack of faith when a bit of hardship turns a High Priest into raving lunatic hell-bent on damning the whole world in his temper tantrum. (I blame God Emperor of Mankind for this rant)
- More like less manly than weak. After all Nords do consider Voice to be badass (probably because of the whole booming thunder voice of most Shouts).
- It could be worse. Qunari for example are rather hell-bent on maintaining their caste system and brainwashing everyone into it. No personal identity or even names.
- Based on Mister "Cheesy Villian" from DA:I Ysmir's guess is probably right.
- I would just make a thrall out of the giant prick... or use Sign of Quen on him and convince him to commit suicide in some spectacular fashion.
4/11/2016 c13 chaosrin
Serana get's her heart's desire, honesty even if Miara had memories of that guy it would fade. I do dislike this aspect even if it fills in some of her background.
Still all others are interesting and the threads with Amell past and potential future.
Would love to see Miara's reaction to the seekers secret.
Serana get's her heart's desire, honesty even if Miara had memories of that guy it would fade. I do dislike this aspect even if it fills in some of her background.
Still all others are interesting and the threads with Amell past and potential future.
Would love to see Miara's reaction to the seekers secret.
4/10/2016 c13 VortexTundra
Loved the chapter, only problem I had was that it was in present tense. I felt like I was reading a script.
Loved the chapter, only problem I had was that it was in present tense. I felt like I was reading a script.
4/10/2016 c13 patiflops2
Love the story, love the chapter, love your work, keep up the fantastic work. Question in the future will we see the mighty imperial legion?
Love the story, love the chapter, love your work, keep up the fantastic work. Question in the future will we see the mighty imperial legion?
4/10/2016 c13 coduss
ooooooooooh boy. Miraak...this is juuuust perfect. i wonder, what would happen if he DID get free...
ooooooooooh boy. Miraak...this is juuuust perfect. i wonder, what would happen if he DID get free...