7/10/2014 c6 thor94
your naruto is just a complete failure, worse than canon.
how with a strict sister naruto can stay a no good?
He should know basic fuinjutsu, kenjutsu and taijutsu normally.
your naruto is just a complete failure, worse than canon.
how with a strict sister naruto can stay a no good?
He should know basic fuinjutsu, kenjutsu and taijutsu normally.
4/21/2014 c5 4Fumes43
Hey you're going in the right direction but perhaps you can find someone to check over your work? The numerous errors and spelling mistakes kind of drag it down. Nevertheless I do enjoy reading it and hope to read more chapters in the future.
Hey you're going in the right direction but perhaps you can find someone to check over your work? The numerous errors and spelling mistakes kind of drag it down. Nevertheless I do enjoy reading it and hope to read more chapters in the future.
4/21/2014 c5 1Elder Sibling
What's with words errors ? Is it because you typed without looking at your keyboard or Is English isn't your first language? Next time please type : "does, serious, & disappeared " correctly.
I like your fic, though
a)I feel that Naruto still a dobe with a Jounin sister is kinda lame, and her reason for not teaching him is Ilogical as Naruto still kid and a bit direction.
b) Having your own sister as a Jounin sensei kinda nespotism, don't you think? Not that I like Kakashi as teacher...
c) Rei DEMANDED respect is very...childish. At her age she should already know that respect is Earned, even among her students.
Nice fic! But please proof read a bit next time.
What's with words errors ? Is it because you typed without looking at your keyboard or Is English isn't your first language? Next time please type : "does, serious, & disappeared " correctly.
I like your fic, though
a)I feel that Naruto still a dobe with a Jounin sister is kinda lame, and her reason for not teaching him is Ilogical as Naruto still kid and a bit direction.
b) Having your own sister as a Jounin sensei kinda nespotism, don't you think? Not that I like Kakashi as teacher...
c) Rei DEMANDED respect is very...childish. At her age she should already know that respect is Earned, even among her students.
Nice fic! But please proof read a bit next time.
4/19/2014 c4 Guest
Its a ok story. One thing I don't like is the facts that their is another Uzumaki and he fail three like like the canon. Your story said only Uzumaki can teach Uzumaki and yet she not helping him with his training. Her reason is that she don't what him to depend on her like she depend on his mom. That just lame. Now that she is teacher, hope she start training right. I read other story were he still have a living family member or two and he still fail three times like the canon. Please don't have him be like the canon one. keep writing more thank you.
Its a ok story. One thing I don't like is the facts that their is another Uzumaki and he fail three like like the canon. Your story said only Uzumaki can teach Uzumaki and yet she not helping him with his training. Her reason is that she don't what him to depend on her like she depend on his mom. That just lame. Now that she is teacher, hope she start training right. I read other story were he still have a living family member or two and he still fail three times like the canon. Please don't have him be like the canon one. keep writing more thank you.
4/18/2014 c4 NarutoKushina
Nice chapter but I really hope Naruto does not stay stupid like in canon. He has a loving sister with a few others around him, who will unlike Kakashi take his training and education seriously. Especially his sister, she should know how to help him out better than anyone.
Nice chapter but I really hope Naruto does not stay stupid like in canon. He has a loving sister with a few others around him, who will unlike Kakashi take his training and education seriously. Especially his sister, she should know how to help him out better than anyone.
4/8/2014 c3 ThunderClaw03
great job keep it up can his sister teach naruto the chakra chains that his mother used. it would be cool if she could update soon
great job keep it up can his sister teach naruto the chakra chains that his mother used. it would be cool if she could update soon