
1/23/2003 c4
1Finalarmor73
Very Very good, I especially love the conversations and the thinking processes they went through, please please keep this up.

Very Very good, I especially love the conversations and the thinking processes they went through, please please keep this up.
1/15/2003 c3 jewels
really good, but u gotta write lots more
really good, but u gotta write lots more
12/4/2002 c2 Guest
wow, our couples sure have been busy! especially piper and leo LOL!
wow, our couples sure have been busy! especially piper and leo LOL!
12/3/2002 c3 somefreak
its nice great plot but maybe you shouldn't have used too many characters and its reli quite confusing to me... anyway keep up the gd werk!
its nice great plot but maybe you shouldn't have used too many characters and its reli quite confusing to me... anyway keep up the gd werk!
12/2/2002 c3
12countertiger-x
yay! you updated...well it's coming in great, but get to the action already! more soon, i hope. -TigerX

yay! you updated...well it's coming in great, but get to the action already! more soon, i hope. -TigerX
11/17/2002 c2 Kurt Uhlig
Are you going to do a chapter on another of the set of characters?
Are you going to do a chapter on another of the set of characters?
11/9/2002 c2 piper
the story was good the first chapter was confussing but anyways the story lines are good so will there be another chapter?
the story was good the first chapter was confussing but anyways the story lines are good so will there be another chapter?
11/4/2002 c2 S.M
interesting story I would appreaceate it if you would finish the story
interesting story I would appreaceate it if you would finish the story
10/30/2002 c2
12countertiger-x
goodness...so many characters...hope you can manage using them at all the same time. Pretty cool 2nd chapter...

goodness...so many characters...hope you can manage using them at all the same time. Pretty cool 2nd chapter...
10/29/2002 c2 CharmedDreamer
I like it so far, I hope in the next chapter we get to know some of the other children, :)
I like it so far, I hope in the next chapter we get to know some of the other children, :)
10/29/2002 c2 Kurt Uhlig
Nice story. I'd like to see where you go with this.
Nice story. I'd like to see where you go with this.