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7/29/2015 c5 Guest
Aaahhhh!I want to know her secret!
7/30/2014 c5 Francesca R
You should have continued the story with like her falling in love with one of the pirates or something like that to continue the journey
4/11/2014 c5 LittleLizzy
make a chapter where Koichi dies then one of the crew will try to comfort her but, she fells inlove with that somebody, but the others confessed too and now she's having a hard time telling them who she really loves...
4/11/2014 c5 zxcblue
heehee this is a chapter wherein most of the characters have quite developed.. you two... how could you have your own night party and left everyone else on the deck? (gives a fishy stare) lol now i feel bad for those guys who start to like you haha! don't worry Nathan, I'm just here for you :D
4/8/2014 c4 Guest
PLEASE WRITE MORE! THIS IS AN AWESOME CHAPTER AND I REALLY WANT TO READ MORE CHAPTERS!
4/6/2014 c4 zxcblue
a great chapter! this one is a large step in progress of the story :D so Koichi has known the fake Morgan/Marcus well... and I wonder what his relationship with Alan though.. past allies or something heehee Nathan! I'm a bit jealous since you're treating her quite well now... lol please don't Nathan lol joke! :D good job! :D
4/4/2014 c3 zxcblue
heehee this was a fun chapter teasing her and such lol it's choosing time! I wonder who she will choose... Hehe I miss Eduardo's tsundere character it's been a while :D Nathan is not doing some scene yet XD oh, is Alan going to appear too? I like him too lol
4/3/2014 c2 zxcblue
oh no! Poor Koichi i hope the gun shot wasn't fatal... he's such a good and caring husband to her.. great chapter now that Eduardo and Russell enter the stage, I'm even looking forward to the next one... oh, and for my Nathan as well lol
4/2/2014 c1 zxcblue
interesting start :) I wonder what will happen next... heehee but I doubt things will turn out well for her and her husband.. congratulations on your first story just keep on writing :D

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