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1/8/2017 c4 Guest
Nice story :)
8/17/2014 c1 25Invader Cole
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8/15/2014 c4 1Lodowa Korona
Nice! I think this is the best chapter so far. I especially liked the sentence when Luffy grins with his eyes shielded by his strawhat. It had the right mood, alright!
Hope to see you update soon :)
8/13/2014 c4 1XPao-17X
I loved ! It's great! I can not wait for the next chapter!
8/6/2014 c3 1Lodowa Korona
nice! :) but why so short? I was looking forward to reading MORE! n_n
I'll keep my fingers crossed that you update soon! :)
8/3/2014 c2 Guest
Lol I was thinking the same thing during that episode. I'm definitely instrested in reading more
8/3/2014 c3 12WolfoftheMoonStorm
Please continue this! Pleeeaaassee! This is great!
7/25/2014 c2 1Lodowa Korona
Nice! :) I really liked how you built the atmosphere in the 1st chapter and how everyone is in character. The story flows pretty nicely, too.
There were just small cases of wrong spelling that I found: when it comes to Japanese words, I believe there should be double "t" in "Shimatta" and it's "Sugoi", not "Sugai". There was also Brook's name spelled "brooke" in the first chapter and "shibukai" instead of "shichibukai". In the 2nd chapter, Franky also "yells up to observation tower". Should it be like this? Something doesn't seem ok in this sentence.
But these are all just small mistakes! They don't really matter :) I'm looking forward to seeing you update! I hope it will be soon! ;)
6/2/2014 c2 4FearyPirate
Hey! Thanks for your review.
I've read your story too. It's written in a very exciting way.
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
Keep up the good work!
5/28/2014 c2 2sisimiura
luffy :D :D :D
5/17/2014 c1 2hawk1989
Very interesting. Keep updating!
4/10/2014 c1 3FlyingNunLord
This sounds interesting, looking forward to how you write it :)
4/9/2014 c1 2sisimiura
waaaaa... interesting.. my favourite series 3

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