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5/25/2014 c10 MissBeatz1079
More please! You write really well :D
5/25/2014 c9 FirstJumper64
I cannot wait to see what happens next! As a suggestion, I think Tris should try to have another baby, but he/she dies. This could be a great twist!

Dauntless forever,
FirstJumper64
5/19/2014 c9 Redrainbowz
Hey awesome story feel like you haven't really given any info on the new initiates though maybe something dramatic can happen with them or 4 &6 can make friends with some of them , I feel as if there's no interaction between them, other than that though good job! Keep going!
5/18/2014 c9 BeatriceHazelWatersEaton
Maye you should say jonathen " accidentally" heard tris was pregnant ( HE DOESNT TELL ERIC OR MAX KEEP THOSE TWO OUT OF THIS STORY PWEEEAAASE
5/18/2014 c9 DarkGuardianAngel22456
Update soon
This is really good
5/18/2014 c9 FirstJumper64
I am loving this so far! If it doesn't bother you, can you update more often? I cannot wait to find out what happens next!( #lovethisstory)
Best wishes!

-FirstJumper64
5/18/2014 c9 Guest
Update sooon! :)) I really like your plot. :))))
5/18/2014 c9 FourandSixisTen
I love the twist! Amazing story keep writing chapters please!
5/18/2014 c4 FourandSixisTen
Fabulous chapter! I love how you knocked Jonathan down a peg or two.
5/18/2014 c3 FourandSixisTen
Hey great story so far! I'm jousting wondering does Jonathan turn out to be divergent?
5/18/2014 c9 33PMakepeace98
Great chapter, please update soon! I really want to know what happens next!
5/11/2014 c8 Guest
this is so good! your a really talented writer!
5/11/2014 c8 26yesfangirlingismylife
Can't. Wait. Much. Longer.
5/11/2014 c8 33PMakepeace98
Great chapter! Please update soon, I can't wait to find out what happens next!
5/10/2014 c8 1pinkie pie's party cannon
Wow Tobias, that was a pretty dick move.
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