
6/3/2024 c4 Guest
Another one bites the dust, it’s pathetic really. at this point I don’t understand why people would write something if they can’t even be bothered to finish it. Like I don’t even care if David kronkite is in your attic and I don’t care if your car broke down, I don’t even care if your computer was stolen or destroyed. It means ABSOLUTELY NOTHING TO ME I love how it’s been 25 pls years ( not literally ) just saying it’s been a while. Get over your granny and write the damn story asswipe loser chud
Another one bites the dust, it’s pathetic really. at this point I don’t understand why people would write something if they can’t even be bothered to finish it. Like I don’t even care if David kronkite is in your attic and I don’t care if your car broke down, I don’t even care if your computer was stolen or destroyed. It means ABSOLUTELY NOTHING TO ME I love how it’s been 25 pls years ( not literally ) just saying it’s been a while. Get over your granny and write the damn story asswipe loser chud
8/17/2023 c4 Guest
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5/26/2021 c4 Guest
I'm so sorry that happened to you and I hope you get better soon but just so you know this chapter was so good as well as the others
I'm so sorry that happened to you and I hope you get better soon but just so you know this chapter was so good as well as the others
7/10/2020 c1 thegrison
It is ok at best but needs work. Dark purple on Naruto is a NO NO. On Ino it works due to the way she wears it and shade of purple. Try again
It is ok at best but needs work. Dark purple on Naruto is a NO NO. On Ino it works due to the way she wears it and shade of purple. Try again
6/23/2020 c2 thegrison
While this story has potential, it fails overall due to errors in information of Naruto's world.
While this story has potential, it fails overall due to errors in information of Naruto's world.
1/11/2019 c4 Borello
this sucks because the story is great.
this sucks because the story is great.
10/11/2018 c1 Guest
Guess what? I hate Sakura too. Sakura haters United! I hate how she disrespects Naruto like that!
Guess what? I hate Sakura too. Sakura haters United! I hate how she disrespects Naruto like that!
9/4/2017 c3 Guest
Dude nobody else likes rapists either. Every author puts that in an introduction and it catches my eye. Good story tho
Dude nobody else likes rapists either. Every author puts that in an introduction and it catches my eye. Good story tho
5/24/2016 c3 Guest
Lol love this sorry please continue
Lol love this sorry please continue
1/8/2016 c4 Penguin Thug God
FUCK WHY IS IT EVERY TIME I FIND A GOOD FUCKING STORY IT'S FUCKING INCOMPLETE?!
FUCK WHY IS IT EVERY TIME I FIND A GOOD FUCKING STORY IT'S FUCKING INCOMPLETE?!