for When the past comes back4/13/2014 c8 Guest
Captured version please :)
Captured version please :)
4/13/2014 c8 
5Burt00
I would really love to read the other chapter where riley is captured! I hope you post it!
5Burt00I would really love to read the other chapter where riley is captured! I hope you post it!
4/12/2014 c7 Guest
More but pleases finish it I love it
More but pleases finish it I love it
4/6/2014 c5 Clockwork Orange
I don't get the dialogue formatting in this chapter. You started off using quotation marks, as you should, but then you went with R and M without quotations? Stick with one format, preferably the correct one.
I don't get the dialogue formatting in this chapter. You started off using quotation marks, as you should, but then you went with R and M without quotations? Stick with one format, preferably the correct one.
4/6/2014 c5 6JenB
I'm enjoying your story but am a little confused about Michael. He sounded like a troubled but good guy who wanted to save his sister. But with this latest chapter he sounds totally bad and mean. Can you explain or will it be more clear in the coming chapters?
6JenBI'm enjoying your story but am a little confused about Michael. He sounded like a troubled but good guy who wanted to save his sister. But with this latest chapter he sounds totally bad and mean. Can you explain or will it be more clear in the coming chapters?
4/6/2014 c4 A
OMG YES PLEASE :)!
OMG YES PLEASE :)!
4/5/2014 c3 Guest
BRILLIANT LOVE!
BRILLIANT LOVE!