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5/11/2014 c1 28RY16
Oh I like her! She's a spolied brat but sort of ... tsundere?
Also my guess is she'll end up with Kanda :3

You kinda messed up the tenses, like you go from present to past and you should really just stick to one.
And another thing: Let's hurry before the Gatekeeper close the gate. - would actually be "Let's hurry before the Gatekeeper closes the gate."
4/5/2014 c1 Guest
I'm liking this story already. Update soon.
4/6/2014 c1 4Jingyeomer
I didn't mind the OC's personality... it was just since she's rich she sounded really annoying and bossy. I hate to be mean but she just seemed that way to me.
Other than that the story was rather good and I liked your writing style. By the way, what's the pairing?
Keep writing! : )
4/5/2014 c1 3crownclown25
How do I put this...what should I feel about the personality of the OC?...

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