Reviews: Lost Children

9/6/2023 c1 Guest
Why is everyone so scattered so far away and in so many direction?

9/4/2014 c3 jag389
good update. Will be looking for more.

4/29/2014 c1 jag389
Nice Start. Now the slash between OC characters ok .

4/9/2014 c1 Guest
Great start .

Interesting start .

Will be awaiting more

Thanks

4/6/2014 c1 Guest
Wonderful start.
Wow with who the children are.
I can't imagine who would be crazy enough to take these children. They would have to know that their parents wouldn't care what methods would have to be used to get their children back.

Great start, so looking forward to finding out what is behind the displacement of the children and the regathering of the children.
what sinister plan is in place.

Thank you for sharing

4/6/2014 c1 Guest
Omg just found this story . Amazing start .

How did the children all come to be placed on earth with false names and memories ?

If lily and Ethan where only 2 years apart in their dreams , true memories why are they now 12 years apart ? Ethan 18 and Kayla 6 ?

Who are these operatives ? Did they take the children in the first place ? What are their formable parents doing to find their children ?

The operative that grabbed (lily ) seems different , caring .

Wonderful and amazing start , love the pairings of whom their parents are :)) perfect .

So looking forward to more.

Thank you :D