for Heartless1/6 c23 Guest
That doctor is driving me crazy! If I was one of his patients and heard him say 'look at me' one more time I'd have knocked his lights out.
That doctor is driving me crazy! If I was one of his patients and heard him say 'look at me' one more time I'd have knocked his lights out.
1/5 c15 Guest
You're just copy pasting things from your previous book. You've just reused the same lines over again but now you took this entire chapter from the last book
You're just copy pasting things from your previous book. You've just reused the same lines over again but now you took this entire chapter from the last book
9/22/2020 c25 Exactly
read this chapter about a 100 times so far and the next one. prize for most emotional chapter in the entire hardy boys fanfiction goes to heartless ch 25/26!
"BYE ERIN JORDAN(seriously, it is the most emotional chapter in the entire place!)".
read this chapter about a 100 times so far and the next one. prize for most emotional chapter in the entire hardy boys fanfiction goes to heartless ch 25/26!
"BYE ERIN JORDAN(seriously, it is the most emotional chapter in the entire place!)".
1/17/2020 c15 
5Countess of crime
Major deja vu. Only now realized it's basically the same as what happened with the orderly that Joe kills in a friend in need
5Countess of crimeMajor deja vu. Only now realized it's basically the same as what happened with the orderly that Joe kills in a friend in need
3/21/2019 c13 Supermikeyninjalady
Dang. I hope frank goes with joe for his having to identify his criminals
Dang. I hope frank goes with joe for his having to identify his criminals
3/21/2019 c11 Supermikeyninjalady
Uh oh I think joe’s going to be pissed at having to see a therapist (which irl is actually such a good thing for most people)
Uh oh I think joe’s going to be pissed at having to see a therapist (which irl is actually such a good thing for most people)
3/21/2019 c10 Supermikeyninjalady
I love the idea of Joe taking after their fathers personality more since frank takes after him in looks
I love the idea of Joe taking after their fathers personality more since frank takes after him in looks
3/20/2019 c6 Supermikeyninjalady
Oh jeez do they seriously think they can actually recruit Joe after everything they’ve done?!
Oh jeez do they seriously think they can actually recruit Joe after everything they’ve done?!
10/11/2015 c16 3elven buddy
You tend to repeat things quite often in your stories. I sometimes feel like I'm reading scenes over again. But beyond that your stories are good :)
3elven buddyYou tend to repeat things quite often in your stories. I sometimes feel like I'm reading scenes over again. But beyond that your stories are good :)