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1/6 c23 Guest
That doctor is driving me crazy! If I was one of his patients and heard him say 'look at me' one more time I'd have knocked his lights out.
1/5 c15 Guest
You're just copy pasting things from your previous book. You've just reused the same lines over again but now you took this entire chapter from the last book
9/22/2020 c25 Exactly
read this chapter about a 100 times so far and the next one. prize for most emotional chapter in the entire hardy boys fanfiction goes to heartless ch 25/26!

"BYE ERIN JORDAN(seriously, it is the most emotional chapter in the entire place!)".
1/17/2020 c15 5Countess of crime
Major deja vu. Only now realized it's basically the same as what happened with the orderly that Joe kills in a friend in need
3/22/2019 c15 10Supermikeyninjalady
Oh man poor Joe! That was definitely self defense
3/21/2019 c13 Supermikeyninjalady
Dang. I hope frank goes with joe for his having to identify his criminals
3/21/2019 c12 Supermikeyninjalady
Woohoo! Yay Joe!
3/21/2019 c11 Supermikeyninjalady
Uh oh I think joe’s going to be pissed at having to see a therapist (which irl is actually such a good thing for most people)
3/21/2019 c10 Supermikeyninjalady
I love the idea of Joe taking after their fathers personality more since frank takes after him in looks
3/20/2019 c9 Supermikeyninjalady
Joe I love you... but you’re being a gigantic idiot
3/20/2019 c8 Supermikeyninjalady
Yes! I was hoping it’d be up to Frank alone to snap joe out of it
3/20/2019 c7 Supermikeyninjalady
Big brother Frank is my favorite kind of Frank
3/20/2019 c6 Supermikeyninjalady
Oh jeez do they seriously think they can actually recruit Joe after everything they’ve done?!
3/20/2019 c3 Supermikeyninjalady
Oh man this is amazing so far!
10/11/2015 c16 3elven buddy
You tend to repeat things quite often in your stories. I sometimes feel like I'm reading scenes over again. But beyond that your stories are good :)
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