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7/14/2014 c24 18Beaner97
Gahhhhh! Yay! He's alive! Woot woot!
7/14/2014 c24 AmazinShelby
This is the best thing I have ever read! Ever!
7/7/2014 c23 14Cherylann Rivers
Very good, intense, well written story. You show Frank and Joe's connection well- both of them vowing that they won't live without the other. I also like how involved Fenton is. When he told Frank in an earlier chapter to allow him to take on the burden of the family so Frank could basically breathe- wwwaaahhh! This story has their girlfriends and friends as well, which, I think, makes it fun to read. Looking forward to more!
7/6/2014 c23 18Beaner97
Omgdnss! The suspense!
7/6/2014 c23 AmazinShelby
Oh my gosh! This is amazing! I can't wait for Frank and Joe to be reunited!
7/3/2014 c22 14Obsessivebookdiva
This chapter was well done, but I noticed that Chet said something along the lines of "we'll take of Joe." I think you meant o put a care in between take and of. Don't know if you would want to fix it or not.
6/30/2014 c22 18Beaner97
Augh! Cliffie! Please update soon!
6/26/2014 c20 14Obsessivebookdiva
A few writing tips: for ya. You need to watch your spacing. Things tend to be to close or too far apart. Also, using the same old says might bore your readers, so make sure to change your discriptions and wordings. Also, similar sounding words tend to be mixed up within the story.

Peace and all that jazz,
Lizzy
6/25/2014 c12 Obsessivebookdiva
I swear you quoted me for some of Joe's lines. Just kidding! Life sucks. And I know exactly how Joe feels. He feels like poison. And he ruins everything he touches.
6/24/2014 c20 grainne1312
Please NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
6/23/2014 c20 12LaurenHardy13
Hurry up and update!
6/23/2014 c20 mas1581
Great chapter; keep frank alive.
6/23/2014 c20 18Beaner97
Oh no! Augh! The suspense! Please update soon!
6/17/2014 c19 AmazinShelby
.Gosh. This is the best story I have ever read! I love it!
6/17/2014 c19 12LaurenHardy13
Curse those cliffhangers. Update again soon.
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