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4/15/2016 c1 Heroic Exaggerations
Interesting concept. I like it! The main issues here are the grammar problems, but that's really technical. Perhaps, you can experiment with different Sailors in different 'timelines' or universes and extend this to a full story? The premise does have a lot of promise! (You would have to come up with a power scale later on, but, not relevant in the moment.)
11/27/2015 c1 1lozipozivanillabean
ohhh interesting first chapter!I hope you continue :) I hadn't thought about doing this sort of crossover before, it sounds great! I'm only writing a Merlin/OC one and I found that hard enough XD I can imagine it would be difficult crossing universes, but you've done it REALLY well! cant wait for more
5/24/2014 c1 9MangaAddict300
Oooo me like it! Can't wait for more!
4/27/2014 c1 6aquafina rain
Ooh I'm excited! I haven't read a Hotaru-centric DBZ fic in awhile so I'm totally interested in where this is heading. I love the little bits of humor (especially Haruka punching Mr. Satan haha). You hinted at Chibi-Usa getting involved in the picture, so I can't wait for that, as well as any pairings for Hotaru you might have planned?! Update soon! :)
4/8/2014 c1 7AnaFrost
Nice work! Love the bit on how Hotaru and Videl remembered Haruka punching out Mr. Satan. If you want more people to read your story, tag the characters as the main pairing. It'll help more people find stories with this couple since there are already so few.
4/7/2014 c1 Guest
NICE! Saturn's new powers are interesting. Let's see where you take this.
4/7/2014 c1 1xXxTenshiBellesxXx
Love your story! This is really well written and would love to write a crossover with you (DBZ and SM respectively)

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