
1/20/2016 c1 Guest
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7/13/2014 c3
4grimmlvr99
I feel so bad for Aiden's parents,they must be absolutely terrified! There's nothing worse than a parent losing their child D:
This was a good chapter,Charity's so bad ass,she'll kick ass on this murder planning charade that Eric's cooking up ;)
Only thing is that it would be easier to read if the separations between the Precinct's POV and Charity's POV were clearer,maybe separate them with spaces,lines,or asterisks? :)
Still,awesome chapter (as always! XD)! Keep writing,you're awesome! Xoxox,Grimmlvr99 ;3

I feel so bad for Aiden's parents,they must be absolutely terrified! There's nothing worse than a parent losing their child D:
This was a good chapter,Charity's so bad ass,she'll kick ass on this murder planning charade that Eric's cooking up ;)
Only thing is that it would be easier to read if the separations between the Precinct's POV and Charity's POV were clearer,maybe separate them with spaces,lines,or asterisks? :)
Still,awesome chapter (as always! XD)! Keep writing,you're awesome! Xoxox,Grimmlvr99 ;3
5/28/2014 c2 Despry
I've read through the first two stories this afternoon and just got to here.
Had to let you know how much I've enjoyer them all
I've read through the first two stories this afternoon and just got to here.
Had to let you know how much I've enjoyer them all
5/22/2014 c2 Random Person
Yes, you should give them a baby. Don't read this next part till you see the finale: #SaveRenard.
Yes, you should give them a baby. Don't read this next part till you see the finale: #SaveRenard.
5/22/2014 c2 Danni99981
Omggggggg thank you sooo much for updating! Amazing story, can't wait for more!
Omggggggg thank you sooo much for updating! Amazing story, can't wait for more!
5/22/2014 c2
107Murderbynuns
I love this series please give them a baby, can't wait to see what you have planed

I love this series please give them a baby, can't wait to see what you have planed
5/8/2014 c1
24ChibiAyane
Kudos! Though I would love to see more Nick/Sean action. They almost weren't in part 2 at all.

Kudos! Though I would love to see more Nick/Sean action. They almost weren't in part 2 at all.
4/18/2014 c1 phoebe
as long as you don't kill Nike and Sean. i don't mind you kill them all .
as long as you don't kill Nike and Sean. i don't mind you kill them all .