Just In
Community
Forum
V
More
for A Very Odd Prequel

10/24/2014 c4 cardgirl91
shamless plugging of other stories as line breaks. nice.
6/7/2014 c3 8cardgirl91
much better with the flow and making sure to separate the two.
5/9/2014 c2 cardgirl91
better but still a little choppy. you need some transitions.
4/11/2014 c1 cardgirl91
sorry not sign in. you need page or section breaks. see you tomorrow.

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service