Reviews: A Very Odd Prequel

10/24/2014 c4 cardgirl91
shamless plugging of other stories as line breaks. nice.

6/7/2014 c3

8cardgirl91
much better with the flow and making sure to separate the two.

5/9/2014 c2 cardgirl91
better but still a little choppy. you need some transitions.

4/11/2014 c1 cardgirl91
sorry not sign in. you need page or section breaks. see you tomorrow.