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1/5/2019 c2 Argonaut986
Logan cares more than he shows. I’m curious about the events in the bank scene.
1/5/2019 c1 Argonaut986
Ember is an interesting character.
4/24/2018 c14 LetsSeeIfICanDoThisToo
Yeah. .. nothing really changed since my last review... it kind feels a bit like the story is trying to grab your attention with by repeating over and over how how different someone is or how tough they've had it... it's pretty heavy on the I'm a victim role... and keeps you in the dark every time something interesting is talked about or suggested..
4/24/2018 c8 LetsSeeIfICanDoThisToo
8 chapters in and I still feel like I'm reading a story about a spectator... parts of the story feel nonchalant and others ... well... spectator ish...

I do really like the concept though. But thus far there has been little witchery and some posturing regarding a mutant issue that apparently isn't that much of an issue outside of Amerika just yet...
The whole wolverine girl witch idea initially doesn't rly appeal from a combat perspective unless we bring in magic as an enhancement in the form of logistics, stealth and capabilities. Her combo just makes claws pointless unless she's going for a melee fighter with magic augmentation going on...

But that's just my opinion.
Anyway I kinda hope stuff gets more engaging soon.
9/1/2017 c3 1Korin Dragoon
Lily's her mom.
6/22/2015 c14 1amerdism
Awesome story, I hope to see more soon, when's the next chapter going up?
1/1/2015 c14 3coronadomontes
maravilloso fanfic-wonderful fanfic
12/29/2014 c5 coronadomontes
interesante fanfic
10/13/2014 c14 Tristi Lynne
love the story so far. lol which two idiots decided to mess with her motorcycle? that is good can't wait for the next chapter. please update soon.
8/24/2014 c14 Kitten Arina
It is nice to see the update to this story and it is for the most part written well but has some grammar issues that could use a little more editing. These chapters also feel short at least to me with the amount of time that you take between updates. It would be nice if you could maybe lengthen them out some and I would love to see some interaction between Luara and Ember. But other then these issues this has been a story that I have come to enjoy. Looking forward to the next chapter.
8/23/2014 c14 16ANGEL FALLEN FROM HEAVEN
Ooooh they r dead
8/23/2014 c14 dogman999
Love the up the good work.
8/22/2014 c13 dogman999
I just read your story and I love it so far. I hope your muse keeps up with you.
7/22/2014 c12 Me
Cool story:-)
5/30/2014 c12 Lady Jamboreemon
This is good so far. Keep updating.
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