for Flash7/28/2016 c1 Guest
Nice one...your stories are well written. The pace is perfect and the story engaging and exciting. Well done again!
Nice one...your stories are well written. The pace is perfect and the story engaging and exciting. Well done again!
3/31/2015 c1 
1enewton1618
Please add more to this if you can I'd love it! It could be an early bday present or something just think about it! But other than that this is great!
1enewton1618Please add more to this if you can I'd love it! It could be an early bday present or something just think about it! But other than that this is great!
4/20/2014 c1 36Mary Kleinsmith
This is great, but please write more. I can't wait to see what happens next. (This is so much better than the miracle recovery in the real episode.g) Thank you for sharing.
36Mary KleinsmithThis is great, but please write more. I can't wait to see what happens next. (This is so much better than the miracle recovery in the real episode.g) Thank you for sharing.
4/13/2014 c1 4Daryl Ann
I like your version much better than what they gave us in the show. They brushed off McGee's injury as a scratch, and never addressed that he stayed to get hat info. from his computer. Thanks for this! :o) DA
4Daryl AnnI like your version much better than what they gave us in the show. They brushed off McGee's injury as a scratch, and never addressed that he stayed to get hat info. from his computer. Thanks for this! :o) DA
4/12/2014 c1 icyquest4
please continue...if you need an idea...gibbs point of view from before the blast to the point where mcgee gives him the flashdrive...and maybe the next chapter gibbs talking to director vance.
please continue...if you need an idea...gibbs point of view from before the blast to the point where mcgee gives him the flashdrive...and maybe the next chapter gibbs talking to director vance.
4/12/2014 c1 Guest
More please very interesting
More please very interesting
4/11/2014 c1 Melmel228
This really good! Wish they would do something like this in the actual show instead of always ignoring Mcgees injurys in the end. Like this and then again when he gets hit with a golf club. Their just like oh give it a min and then bam he's fine. It's irritating, so coming on here and seeing stuff like this is nice. So thank you so much!
This really good! Wish they would do something like this in the actual show instead of always ignoring Mcgees injurys in the end. Like this and then again when he gets hit with a golf club. Their just like oh give it a min and then bam he's fine. It's irritating, so coming on here and seeing stuff like this is nice. So thank you so much!
4/10/2014 c1 hostaqueen
I really like this. I couldn't believe the writers glossed over everyone's injuries, so I read all the fanfiction I can find to round it out. Thanks for posting.
I really like this. I couldn't believe the writers glossed over everyone's injuries, so I read all the fanfiction I can find to round it out. Thanks for posting.