for Precious Love4/26/2016 c1 
31Bar Sira
Dear notwritten:
Yes, that's how it works. I wish we'd gotten more sense of Jade as an individual, though; it would have made the story more meaningful. As it is, there's the feeling that she might have just been anybody, and that's not how love is at all; it may be arbitrary, but it's never indifferent.
Sincerely,
Bar Sira
31Bar SiraDear notwritten:
Yes, that's how it works. I wish we'd gotten more sense of Jade as an individual, though; it would have made the story more meaningful. As it is, there's the feeling that she might have just been anybody, and that's not how love is at all; it may be arbitrary, but it's never indifferent.
Sincerely,
Bar Sira
4/15/2014 c1 2 lazy 2 log in
thanks for this very touching poem. I enjoyed it.
thanks for this very touching poem. I enjoyed it.
4/10/2014 c1 1Wilhelm Wigworthy
Awesome! You really know about emtional development. Here's hoping for more!
1Wilhelm WigworthyAwesome! You really know about emtional development. Here's hoping for more!