
3/25 c1 margarett1098
Hi Margaret here,
I just finished reading your story, and I wanted to take a moment to say how much I loved it! The way you crafted the characters, the storyline, and the emotions throughout was truly Absorbing. It kept me hooked from start to finish, and I really appreciate the effort and creativity you put into it.
Thank you for sharing such an amazing piece of work, I genuinely enjoyed every moment of it! Keep up the great work, and I look forward to reading more from you.
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Hi Margaret here,
I just finished reading your story, and I wanted to take a moment to say how much I loved it! The way you crafted the characters, the storyline, and the emotions throughout was truly Absorbing. It kept me hooked from start to finish, and I really appreciate the effort and creativity you put into it.
Thank you for sharing such an amazing piece of work, I genuinely enjoyed every moment of it! Keep up the great work, and I look forward to reading more from you.
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11/23/2024 c1 noir-love
This story is a thrilling continuation of the world we know and love, packed with suspense, emotional depth, and a healthy dose of humor. The way it blends the everyday struggles of the characters with high-stakes situations creates a perfect balance that keeps you hooked from start to finish. The chemistry between Dimitri and Rose remains as dynamic and entertaining as ever, and the undercover mission adds an exciting twist to their already complicated lives.
I could definitely see this story looking great in a different medium, such as a comic, webtoon, or even a motion comic! If you don't mind, we could discuss this further over email or Discord (my handle is noir_love) – it would be easier to explore the possibilities, as I’m also a commission artist specialized in turning words into visual art. Looking forward to hearing from you!
This story is a thrilling continuation of the world we know and love, packed with suspense, emotional depth, and a healthy dose of humor. The way it blends the everyday struggles of the characters with high-stakes situations creates a perfect balance that keeps you hooked from start to finish. The chemistry between Dimitri and Rose remains as dynamic and entertaining as ever, and the undercover mission adds an exciting twist to their already complicated lives.
I could definitely see this story looking great in a different medium, such as a comic, webtoon, or even a motion comic! If you don't mind, we could discuss this further over email or Discord (my handle is noir_love) – it would be easier to explore the possibilities, as I’m also a commission artist specialized in turning words into visual art. Looking forward to hearing from you!
3/15/2024 c49 Rozabelikov1446
Bonjour enffet je suis française et je suis fan de vampire academy donc je lis plein de fanfictions sur plein de site diffé ne sais pas si tu vas voir mon commentaire,mais je voulais quand même te dire que ton histoire était merveilleuse vraiment je n'ai jamais lu de meilleures fanfic de toute manière vie d'habitude je la commence puis elle ne m'intéresse plus moi toi tu as réussi a écrire une histoire intéressante du début jusqu'à le fin .
Je voulais te dire de continuer parce que se que tu écris est tellement bon et ton écriture aussi (même si je l'ai lu avec Google trad et que parfois la traduction n'était pas super:( ).
Voilà sache que c'est super se que tu fais!
Bonjour enffet je suis française et je suis fan de vampire academy donc je lis plein de fanfictions sur plein de site diffé ne sais pas si tu vas voir mon commentaire,mais je voulais quand même te dire que ton histoire était merveilleuse vraiment je n'ai jamais lu de meilleures fanfic de toute manière vie d'habitude je la commence puis elle ne m'intéresse plus moi toi tu as réussi a écrire une histoire intéressante du début jusqu'à le fin .
Je voulais te dire de continuer parce que se que tu écris est tellement bon et ton écriture aussi (même si je l'ai lu avec Google trad et que parfois la traduction n'était pas super:( ).
Voilà sache que c'est super se que tu fais!
7/5/2023 c24 Chell Belikova
Enjoying the story, it’s very fun.
Bring on the M by the way
I few questions/observations… the strigoi are super powered and dimitri thinks 7 on one is something he can easily handle. I think rose and dimitri are overpowered in this story, but hey that is your poetic licence.
I do think that dimitri and rose together could handle 7 by working together. Maybe if the strigoi are making fresh inexperienced vampires they could handle them on their own, it feels like a stretch.
If they were seeing such numbers, wouldn’t Hans want a backup team or to plant some characters at the dance in disguise to help our two hero’s? It doesn’t make tactical sense to not provide backup.
I can’t wait to read the rest and I’m only half way!
Enjoying the story, it’s very fun.
Bring on the M by the way
I few questions/observations… the strigoi are super powered and dimitri thinks 7 on one is something he can easily handle. I think rose and dimitri are overpowered in this story, but hey that is your poetic licence.
I do think that dimitri and rose together could handle 7 by working together. Maybe if the strigoi are making fresh inexperienced vampires they could handle them on their own, it feels like a stretch.
If they were seeing such numbers, wouldn’t Hans want a backup team or to plant some characters at the dance in disguise to help our two hero’s? It doesn’t make tactical sense to not provide backup.
I can’t wait to read the rest and I’m only half way!
5/5/2023 c8 MacAndCheeseDreams
Leave it to Rose to find a way to get a gaggle of girls to stop fawning over her man without breaking her cover. LOL
Leave it to Rose to find a way to get a gaggle of girls to stop fawning over her man without breaking her cover. LOL
7/21/2022 c49
8The cat with blue eyes
very nice story! I remembered only part of it but it was super great to read it again

very nice story! I remembered only part of it but it was super great to read it again
5/18/2022 c49 Guest
Really great story
Really great story
5/9/2022 c50 Filipina04
Loved it! Kinda sad that human Alex was never mentioned again when the mission was done, kinda curious how her life turned out.
Loved it! Kinda sad that human Alex was never mentioned again when the mission was done, kinda curious how her life turned out.
3/3/2020 c31 Guest
Thx so much for this excellent wrighting
Thx so much for this excellent wrighting
7/23/2019 c7 Rookybooky2453
Your bio is hilarious, just a bit too long though, and quite a mouthful...
Not like that you creep!
Your bio is hilarious, just a bit too long though, and quite a mouthful...
Not like that you creep!
11/29/2018 c41 ginabowman2005
Well, in the books the keepers had babies with both Dhampir and Humans. The only coupling that isn't supposed to have offspring is Dhampir/Dhampir. But since Rose was brought back, healed from death, she was perfectly healed in that moment. I believe the defect that prohibits Dhampirs from having babies together was healed out of her. I think Dimitri being healed to the point his soul reentered his body and he has residual Spirit in his cells will play a part in him and Rose being able to have children.
Well, in the books the keepers had babies with both Dhampir and Humans. The only coupling that isn't supposed to have offspring is Dhampir/Dhampir. But since Rose was brought back, healed from death, she was perfectly healed in that moment. I believe the defect that prohibits Dhampirs from having babies together was healed out of her. I think Dimitri being healed to the point his soul reentered his body and he has residual Spirit in his cells will play a part in him and Rose being able to have children.
11/29/2018 c25 ginabowman2005
With all these attacks and dead strigoi they really need Sydney right there with them. So she can dissolve the bodies. She could also get samples of stuff herself if she was acting like a student too.
With all these attacks and dead strigoi they really need Sydney right there with them. So she can dissolve the bodies. She could also get samples of stuff herself if she was acting like a student too.