for The Devil's Bargain5/5/2014 c1 
20prdee
Oooh I remember reading this before! Like years ago when you sent me the first half, haha.
I really like the introduction and the secretary's analysis of Misaki. Very Sherlock-ish, hehe.
'Refusal would only serve to make her look weak and seem rude.' - I beg to differ. Just because someone does not accept alcohol, does not make them weak. On the contrary, it makes them quite strong because they have not fallen prey to peer pressure and can make their own decision, without worrying about what other people think. It's hardly rude either, he's serving alcohol to a minor. For all Misaki knows, he could somehow use that against her. And even if this were some other scenario, refusing alcohol does not make a person seem rude. Perhaps that person doesn't like alcohol. Perhaps that person is trying to be sober, who knows.
Haha that part seemed too formal, sorry! You know how I feel about alcohol in general :P
Anyways, I really liked your idea about how the ESP could use Misaki's alice stone. It's a really ingenious idea really ; something which I can actually imagine him doing. Why hadn't I thought of it before? xD
His bargain seems too hard to resist, especially since he involved Tsubasa in it. Sly as always, that ESP .
I can only imagine what the ESP would do with her alice stone...
Yes, this was a good point to stop at! It makes me wonder what could possibly happen next haha.
Anyways, this was a good read :) I think I'm reading a GA fic after a year (or two?) now, haha
Goooood job, T!
Looking forward to reading more fics by youuu! (can you pls write a dramione or something? tanks)
-P
20prdeeOooh I remember reading this before! Like years ago when you sent me the first half, haha.
I really like the introduction and the secretary's analysis of Misaki. Very Sherlock-ish, hehe.
'Refusal would only serve to make her look weak and seem rude.' - I beg to differ. Just because someone does not accept alcohol, does not make them weak. On the contrary, it makes them quite strong because they have not fallen prey to peer pressure and can make their own decision, without worrying about what other people think. It's hardly rude either, he's serving alcohol to a minor. For all Misaki knows, he could somehow use that against her. And even if this were some other scenario, refusing alcohol does not make a person seem rude. Perhaps that person doesn't like alcohol. Perhaps that person is trying to be sober, who knows.
Haha that part seemed too formal, sorry! You know how I feel about alcohol in general :P
Anyways, I really liked your idea about how the ESP could use Misaki's alice stone. It's a really ingenious idea really ; something which I can actually imagine him doing. Why hadn't I thought of it before? xD
His bargain seems too hard to resist, especially since he involved Tsubasa in it. Sly as always, that ESP .
I can only imagine what the ESP would do with her alice stone...
Yes, this was a good point to stop at! It makes me wonder what could possibly happen next haha.
Anyways, this was a good read :) I think I'm reading a GA fic after a year (or two?) now, haha
Goooood job, T!
Looking forward to reading more fics by youuu! (can you pls write a dramione or something? tanks)
-P